The Library Book Drop
a rhyming poem in 6/5/6/5134 total reviews
Comment from artisart4u
This is nice because I worked in a library for thirty some years and I know what a book drop is like.
I like how you made you made imaginary, a style children love.
Good luck with your poem.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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This is nice because I worked in a library for thirty some years and I know what a book drop is like.
I like how you made you made imaginary, a style children love.
Good luck with your poem.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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artisart4u, thank you so very much for your most generous response to this poem, especially because of your library background :-) Brooke
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Beautifully written and such a thoughtful look at a task most mums take for granted.
I love the imagery and description used to explain the many adventures returned back through the return book slot.
Perfect rhyme and meter and a lovely, bright presentation.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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Beautifully written and such a thoughtful look at a task most mums take for granted.
I love the imagery and description used to explain the many adventures returned back through the return book slot.
Perfect rhyme and meter and a lovely, bright presentation.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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Seken, I truly appreciate your generous reviews that I have just woken up to. You've made my day before it has even started :-) Brooke
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Sasha
This is so precious. It is amazing what children think of the things we take for granted. Someday I'll write a short story about my what my daughters thought an off ramp to the freeway was...it is hysterical. Great work with this one. Marvelous subject. fun bouncy flow, and terrific rhyme. I enjoyed this immensely.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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This is so precious. It is amazing what children think of the things we take for granted. Someday I'll write a short story about my what my daughters thought an off ramp to the freeway was...it is hysterical. Great work with this one. Marvelous subject. fun bouncy flow, and terrific rhyme. I enjoyed this immensely.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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Valerie, thank you so much :-) I can't wait to read that story :-) Brooke
Comment from kiwijenny
I love love love it,.......I love the thought of pirate crew being swallowed...gulp by the library book drop........well done.........
This is delightful
God bless
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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I love love love it,.......I love the thought of pirate crew being swallowed...gulp by the library book drop........well done.........
This is delightful
God bless
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Deb, for such a generous review and encouraging comments :-) Brooke
Comment from krys123
Brooke;
The picture that you used of Sawyer dropping a book into the library slot is precious and complementary to your poem.
Your rhyming quatrains were done very well in with your tempo and meter done exceptionally your rhythm flowed smoothly throughout your poem. Your writing was neither forced nor labored throughout your poem.
Your message was quite clear and enjoyable to read as it was expressed nicely and described so well.
Thank you for sharing and posting this for everyone to read and may the sun always shine on your shoulders.
Alex
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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Brooke;
The picture that you used of Sawyer dropping a book into the library slot is precious and complementary to your poem.
Your rhyming quatrains were done very well in with your tempo and meter done exceptionally your rhythm flowed smoothly throughout your poem. Your writing was neither forced nor labored throughout your poem.
Your message was quite clear and enjoyable to read as it was expressed nicely and described so well.
Thank you for sharing and posting this for everyone to read and may the sun always shine on your shoulders.
Alex
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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Alex, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
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You are so sincerely welcome Brooke
Comment from marijmd
Are elephants roaming
the African plains
now giving the book drop
severe tummy pains - soooo cute and imaginative!
such a charming ditty
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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Are elephants roaming
the African plains
now giving the book drop
severe tummy pains - soooo cute and imaginative!
such a charming ditty
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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marijmd, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Christine B.
I have had a clear and truly childlike innocence nearly float to my surface while taking this in. Like any golden memories, I wish to absorb it. The way your work is capable of being inspired by what is childlike and also displaying this graceful seriousness in tone, this depth, is a treasure. A genius. Reading what you have to say couldn't make for a more rewarding experience! I adore it.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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I have had a clear and truly childlike innocence nearly float to my surface while taking this in. Like any golden memories, I wish to absorb it. The way your work is capable of being inspired by what is childlike and also displaying this graceful seriousness in tone, this depth, is a treasure. A genius. Reading what you have to say couldn't make for a more rewarding experience! I adore it.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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Christine, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from LoannaLois
O.K. the cutest-ever-meter is in full force on this one! How absolutely precious.
This idea, in and of itself is stellar. How do you do it? (she asks, with just an itsy bitsy tad of envy....o.k.with a LOT of envy...LOL
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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O.K. the cutest-ever-meter is in full force on this one! How absolutely precious.
This idea, in and of itself is stellar. How do you do it? (she asks, with just an itsy bitsy tad of envy....o.k.with a LOT of envy...LOL
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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Lois, thank you so very much :-) I so appreciate your generosity and encouragement :-) Brooke
Comment from manicblue
I love how you take a simple object or simple topic and weave a tale with imagination, fun, and turn us all into innocent children taking part in enjoyable activities. I loved the picture too. The world is such an exciting place seen from the eyes of a child. Thank you for bringing back precious memories!
Lucretia
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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I love how you take a simple object or simple topic and weave a tale with imagination, fun, and turn us all into innocent children taking part in enjoyable activities. I loved the picture too. The world is such an exciting place seen from the eyes of a child. Thank you for bringing back precious memories!
Lucretia
Comment Written 05-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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Thanks so much, Lucretia :-) Brooke
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is yet another interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. I often wonder what happens to the books I get rid of as well. I usually take them down to the charity shop. It would be a great idea if you could pay a fee to track it. Maybe we should suggest that.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014
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This is yet another interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. I often wonder what happens to the books I get rid of as well. I usually take them down to the charity shop. It would be a great idea if you could pay a fee to track it. Maybe we should suggest that.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014
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Thanks so much, Tomes :-) Brooke
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My pleasure
