2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "haiku (flash sonic boom and)"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
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Comment from rspoet
This is a fine haiku for the contest
Excellent imagery in the flash/boom/spark
Very good grammatical connection
Solid satori line
Syllables good and S/L/S
Excellent picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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This is a fine haiku for the contest
Excellent imagery in the flash/boom/spark
Very good grammatical connection
Solid satori line
Syllables good and S/L/S
Excellent picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Thank you so much for the awesome review -rspoet :)
Comment from MLEaton
Fascinating haiku. This form always amazes me because it is so concise and yet conveys so much. I hope it does well in the competition because I could almost smell the ozone in the air after reading it!
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Fascinating haiku. This form always amazes me because it is so concise and yet conveys so much. I hope it does well in the competition because I could almost smell the ozone in the air after reading it!
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Thank you so much for the awesome review -MLEaton :)
Comment from Lesley Collier
An avid poem vividly describing the force of lightening which makes you feel as if is right in front of you. Love the dramatic ending.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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An avid poem vividly describing the force of lightening which makes you feel as if is right in front of you. Love the dramatic ending.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much Lesley I really appreciate your review and kind words. :) Thank you very much for the six stars!
Comment from Christof McTarnahan
Brilliant. Simply brilliant. I stand in awe of this profound body of work. So much said, with so few words...Indescribable. The lightning art was like a visual razor, slicing me to the quick. Great work.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Brilliant. Simply brilliant. I stand in awe of this profound body of work. So much said, with so few words...Indescribable. The lightning art was like a visual razor, slicing me to the quick. Great work.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much Lesley I really appreciate your review and kind words. :)
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Lesley?
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Oops! I am sorry, I have so many reviewers I get confused sometimes.
Comment from royowen
A really nice entry in this haiku lightning contest, the presentation is brilliant, the entry is a good one, it's a difficult poetic discipline for my western mind, but well done, good luck in the contest, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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A really nice entry in this haiku lightning contest, the presentation is brilliant, the entry is a good one, it's a difficult poetic discipline for my western mind, but well done, good luck in the contest, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much Lesley I really appreciate your review and kind words. :)
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Most welcome
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Most welcome, Roy
Comment from Joyce Long
Best of luck for the Haiku-Lightening Contest. Very well done. Your picture really fits your poem. I have always found it difficult to think that the lightening strike we see is coming up from the ground and not going down to it. I'm not really into science.
Thanks for sharing.
Joyce 11-18-15
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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Best of luck for the Haiku-Lightening Contest. Very well done. Your picture really fits your poem. I have always found it difficult to think that the lightening strike we see is coming up from the ground and not going down to it. I'm not really into science.
Thanks for sharing.
Joyce 11-18-15
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Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much Lesley I really appreciate your review and kind words. :) That is interesting, I always thought the lightning was coming from above.