Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is such a true and charming poem. Loved it. The content is playful. Great rhyming. We do slave over each word. The solace is knowing that everyone else does the same. Good job with this enjoyable, fun post. (I'd better go have my mid-morning snack!) Marilyn

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015

Yep, me too, Marilyn. But I can't just yet, see.I have this poem I'm working on...
Oh, woe is me, here I go again, heh-heh...

Thanks for reviewing this poem from my "brighter side", Marilyn. I sure do appreciate it!

~Dean :}

Comment from Michaelk

Excellent

Sometimes I wish I could skip meals just to write, but with a large family, eating isn't the only thing that occupies my time.
I loved your funny little poem. It reminded me of when we have bacon and eggs for supper. We call it 'Brupper'.
It is great dedication to write so much that you forget to eat, however, I once read an article about a very successful author (I forget who) who said that when she is writing, she makes it a point to go do something physical at least once an hour to keep the blood flowing to the brain.
Maybe she makes someone eat crow. :)

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015

You've got that right, Mike!
The inspiration for this came from a recent 24-hour editing marathon for an editor who simply had to have a revised chapter to a story I'd written for my book. And she wanted it the day before yesterday, if you catch my drift? That's where the idea for this crazy post originated from.
Thanks for giving it a shot. I really appreciate the read and your kind comments.
Always with respect,

~Dean :}

Comment from Deborah Marie

Excellent

Well penned with creative placement of cartoon characters. You have a creative flair when writing your poems. Nice progression, rhythm and flow. Thanks for sharing and keep 'em coming. God Bless, Deb

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015

Thank you, Deborah Marie. I appreciate you taking the time to read this silly thing. Rest assured, I will always do my best.

Respectfully,

~Dean

Comment from Linda Engel

Excellent

And I have done just that, too. skip meals. My doctor says I can not do that because I am diabetic. SOOOOO.. now I keep bags of nuts and fruits at my desk to nibble away on. Right now I sent out my co-worker for lunch so that I wouldn't have to leave my desk. (I'm pitiful).
Keep on writing and reviewing. Good one Dean.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015

Well, that's just good time management in my opinion, Linda. LOL...
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing this silly thing. I really appreciate it.
~Dean :}

Comment from wordspinner314

Excellent

I loved it! It was creative and original, and obviously quite hilarious. It also speaks to so many of us writers who skip meals because we've become engrossed in a writing project and don't even realize how many hours have passed until our stomachs are growling in protest.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015

You've got that right, wordspinner! recently I had a 24-hour editing marathon for an editor who simply had to have a revised chapter to a story I'd written for my book. And she wanted it the day before yesterday, if you catch my drift? That's where the inspiration for this crazy post originates from.
Thanks for giving it a shot. I really appreciate the read and kind comments.
Always with respect,

~Dean :}

reply by wordspinner314 on 12-Oct-2015

I understand, especially since I'm sitting here with a growling stomach, realizing I've yet to eat breakfast because I've been writing for 2 hours!

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015

Yep. See what I mean? Heh-heh... ;}

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

I enjoyed this immensely. It is a fun and delightful poem that I can partially relate to. I usually eat just one meal a day, jut not hungry in all this heat. I especially got a kick out of the last paragraph and your notes were a hoot too.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015

Thanks so much for reading, Smurph! recently I had a 24-hour editing marathon for an editor who simply had to have a revised chapter to a story I'd written for my book. And she wanted it the day before yesterday, if you catch my drift? That's where the inspiration for this crazy post originates from.
Thanks for giving it a shot. I really appreciate the read and kind comments.
Always with respect,

~Dean :}

Comment from JourneyHolm

Excellent

Ah, yes, a meal I have enjoyed quite often. I found this poem extremely creative, especially the combined name of the meals. The rhyme and meter made this a fun and entertaining read. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015

Thanks for checking it out, JH. Yes sir, this one was written purely for the sake of having fun. I'm happy you had a little yourself by reading it.

Always with respect,

~Dean :}

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Exceptional

What fun! I lovvve it! You surprised me so much that I had to recheck the author's name. Sure enough, Mr. Horror is the writer of this lighthearted, imaginative, wacky poem. I have to ask... are you feeling okay? Not possessed by any demons, are you? :)

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015

Hahaha

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015

Hahaha, I surprised you didn't I, Phyllis. Hey, even I have to crawl out into the light every now and then. After all, heaven knows I don't want to become like my ill-fated protagonist in my last limerick. That would not be good.
Thanks for the sixe stars, and for reading this crazy poem in the first place.
I am really happy you enjoyed it.

Always with respect

~Dean :}

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

I am pleased to see a fun side of you. I like breakfalupper breakfast, lunch and supper all in one. Unfortunately I have to eat 5 times a day small portions of food and fruits to keep the sugar levels in tact.

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 Comment Written 12-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015

Well, thank you very much for taking the time to read it, Sandra. I really appreciate it.
Diabetes runs rampant in my family on my father's side. Thank heaven's I've escaped I so far. Thanks again fore reading!
Always with respect,
~Dean

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello Handsome :)

LOL This poem is too funny. I love the animation and the art work. Breakfalupper is my kind of cooking. It's just me at home and I don't want to cook most of the time. Good job my friend!

Check out this line, I think -witers- is suppose to be writers. :)

Gypsy


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 Comment Written 12-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015

Than you, Gypsy darlin'! recently I had a 24-hour editing marathon for an editor who simply had to have a revised chapter to a story I'd written for my book. And she wanted it the day before yesterday, if you catch my drift? That's where the inspiration for this crazy post originates from.
Thanks for giving it a shot. I really appreciate the read and kind comments.
Always with respect,

~Dean :}