Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

Lovely poem, with a simple message about love for a baby or an offspring. Powerful message, super layout, with the added bonus of the baby's giggle. Well-written. Faye

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2013

Thanks so much, Faye. I really appreciate it!

Comment from Green Lake Girl

Excellent

A very dear poem, Dean. Visually, a treat to read. The message so simple, yet heart felt. I'm sure your kids realize what a great Dad they have!

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2013

I really appreciate that, Green Lake Girl! I'm glad you liked it...

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

Awesomely divine as is always the case with your writing! I just love the simplicity of the structure allowing the picture to do the heavy lifting in terms of elevation. I bow humbly at your feet and than you so much for sharing this with me.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2013

Thanks, Mystic Angel, thanks a bunch! I am very glad you liked this one, and I really appreciate your wonderful review.

reply by Mystic Angel 7777 on 09-Dec-2013

MWAHHH! My pleasure.

Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

These are the words of all parents. All of us feel this exact same way about our own children. We adore them and want to keep them safe.

Fine rhyming couplets, Dean.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2013

Thanks, BD. I appreciate that!

Comment from songbyrd

Excellent

What a beautiful tribute of your love for your precious children. What a blessing and a treasure they are in our lives, and we surely will be there for them no matter what. Beautiful!

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2013

Thanks very much, songbyrd. I truly am grateful for your comments and wonderful review.

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is beautiful, dean, a wonderful tribute to the love you have for your children and cherish them the way they should be cherished. i enjoyed reading this one..

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2013

Thanks, sweet, I really am grateful for such a kind review. Much obliged!

Comment from Patrick G Cox

Excellent

Hi Dean Kuch,

Our children are gifts, and we should, as your poem suggests, love them unconditionally. The modern idea that children are a 'right' and some sort of fashion accessory leads, in the end, to rejection and bitter disappointment.

Patrick

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 Comment Written 09-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2013

I agree one-hundred and fifty percent, Patrick.

Thanks for the excellent review, very well stated!