A Picture's Worth a Thousand Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Don't Fear the Reaper: cryptic 5-7-5"A compilation of pictapoems from my portfolio
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Comment from The Death
It was a very interesting poem and so are your informative notes.Loved the theme selection and you already are great at this genre.Congrats for your poem of the month,I was away and couldn't vote.your works are always awazing:)
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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It was a very interesting poem and so are your informative notes.Loved the theme selection and you already are great at this genre.Congrats for your poem of the month,I was away and couldn't vote.your works are always awazing:)
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Aw, well, we can't be expected to hang around in one spot forever, now, can we?
Thanks for your gracious review, Anupam Sharma.
Comment from Lulube
I like this dark poem and I get it.
I like comprehend your fear good message
closely hold it's darkness near whatever it is don't let it get the better of you
don't fear the Reaper don't let the fear scare you to death
Maybe right maybe wrong eh?
I love the drop of blood under notes you are so creative with this computer stuff.
lulube if you could you would make your poems give off a scent,.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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I like this dark poem and I get it.
I like comprehend your fear good message
closely hold it's darkness near whatever it is don't let it get the better of you
don't fear the Reaper don't let the fear scare you to death
Maybe right maybe wrong eh?
I love the drop of blood under notes you are so creative with this computer stuff.
lulube if you could you would make your poems give off a scent,.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Nope, you're absolutely right-on, Lulube. Thanks for the review and the very nice compliments.
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lucky on this one I is. I don't normally get that close on the darker side of things, at least I don't say. lol
lulube
Comment from Green Lake Girl
Very clever. And yes, we need more cowbell. Thanks for the history included in your notes. You are amazingly creative, Dean!
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Very clever. And yes, we need more cowbell. Thanks for the history included in your notes. You are amazingly creative, Dean!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Thanks, very nice of you to think so, Green Lake Girl...
Comment from costellsgirl33
I may not fear the reaper but I sure fear that picture. But i'm thinking that's the reaper, so maybe I do fear him. This was a great poem. You expressed a lot in such a short amount of words. Creepy creepy images, way to go my friend
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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I may not fear the reaper but I sure fear that picture. But i'm thinking that's the reaper, so maybe I do fear him. This was a great poem. You expressed a lot in such a short amount of words. Creepy creepy images, way to go my friend
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Thanks, costellsgirl33, I appreciate that!
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You are very welcome
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Undoubtedly, strong human emotion of fear has been exalted, morally and per legends or mythology the emotion is put in a lesson for guidance how to control or win fear, influentially worded. 01/829
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Undoubtedly, strong human emotion of fear has been exalted, morally and per legends or mythology the emotion is put in a lesson for guidance how to control or win fear, influentially worded. 01/829
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Thanks you for your very intelligent & spot-on review of this one, Alcreator Litt Dear. You nailed it, my friend...
Comment from Gungalo
Awesome Dean. Really a well thought out write. The story of the reaper is a great one and should provide adequate information to scare the readers to bits. LOL
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Awesome Dean. Really a well thought out write. The story of the reaper is a great one and should provide adequate information to scare the readers to bits. LOL
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Hah, thank you, Gungalo. I certainly hope so, LOL...
I appreciate your wonderful review.
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Smile Dean.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Dean you got my full attention with your cryptic 5-7-5
here is my response from a old poem I wrote here on Fanstory--
A morbid senyru
the reaper by Gert sherwood
http://www.fanstory.com/usr/138449/th_member_1424_15642644.jpg
Gert
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Hello Dean you got my full attention with your cryptic 5-7-5
here is my response from a old poem I wrote here on Fanstory--
A morbid senyru
the reaper by Gert sherwood
http://www.fanstory.com/usr/138449/th_member_1424_15642644.jpg
Gert
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Thank you vey much, Gert. I shall check it out, right away!
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Nice looking little fellow, isn't he? Heh heh...
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He's not my friend and he knows it.
Gert
Hi Dean
thank you.
Smiles
Gert
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
Well, this wasn't overly scary. Do you do your own artwork? The sound effects often gives one the creeps before they start reading. I'm glad this is your calling and not our's You do a great job at it without doubt. We are tag teaming today. God loves you and so do we.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Well, this wasn't overly scary. Do you do your own artwork? The sound effects often gives one the creeps before they start reading. I'm glad this is your calling and not our's You do a great job at it without doubt. We are tag teaming today. God loves you and so do we.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Yes, Evelyn, most of the artwork I do myself. Not all, though. I pray your recovery is going well? Just know that you are in mine and my families prayers daily...
Thanks for the wonderful review.
Comment from lindalcreel
Oh - those songs take me back. How do you put this altogether in such a short time? The pictures and the music are magnificent. I never know what surprise is waiting when I see that you have posted a new pictapoem. This is a ten. Thoroughly enjoyed this from beginning to end. Thanks so much for sharing.
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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Oh - those songs take me back. How do you put this altogether in such a short time? The pictures and the music are magnificent. I never know what surprise is waiting when I see that you have posted a new pictapoem. This is a ten. Thoroughly enjoyed this from beginning to end. Thanks so much for sharing.
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Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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I thank you for taking the time to read and review it for me, lindalcreel!
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Welcome:)
Comment from Spitfire
Not cryptic at all, IMO. People fear the reaper because they don't know what happens next. Of course, the church teaches all about sin and hell. But that's here on earth--the testing ground. Good use of alliteration with comprehend and closely. Assonance of near and fear.
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Not cryptic at all, IMO. People fear the reaper because they don't know what happens next. Of course, the church teaches all about sin and hell. But that's here on earth--the testing ground. Good use of alliteration with comprehend and closely. Assonance of near and fear.
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Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Thank you, Spit, for my first review of this one! I love it when my tougher critics get ahold of my writings first. If they find it acceptable, then I know there's hope for me yet, LOL!
Seriously, thank you very much.