Forgiveness
Acrostic57 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
This is a deep acrostic poem which defines forgiveness in true, honest steps. It also starts and ends with forgiveness. I like the metaphor of road for those tentative steps of faith and trust that it takes to forgive.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018
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This is a deep acrostic poem which defines forgiveness in true, honest steps. It also starts and ends with forgiveness. I like the metaphor of road for those tentative steps of faith and trust that it takes to forgive.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much for your excellent review****kahpot
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Acrostic Poetry writing prompt.
Your verse spells out forgiveness very clearly and nicely.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the Acrostic Poetry writing prompt.
Your verse spells out forgiveness very clearly and nicely.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 26-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from jdrhye
Nice job! It was not until I was reading the last few lines that I realized it was an Acrostic poem. Nice job articulating, good flow and tone. Enjoyed.
J
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018
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Nice job! It was not until I was reading the last few lines that I realized it was an Acrostic poem. Nice job articulating, good flow and tone. Enjoyed.
J
Comment Written 26-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018
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Thank very much****kahpot
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Inspiring, moving. Forgiveness opens the door to healing and to God. The words are full of grace and express spiritual maturity.
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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018
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Inspiring, moving. Forgiveness opens the door to healing and to God. The words are full of grace and express spiritual maturity.
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Comment Written 26-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Y. M. Roger
So beautiful and so very well composed that it has a melody all its own! You have certainly mastered this style of poetry!
Thank you for sharing the beauty with all of us!
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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So beautiful and so very well composed that it has a melody all its own! You have certainly mastered this style of poetry!
Thank you for sharing the beauty with all of us!
Comment Written 26-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Wow! Thank you very much for your wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from brenda faye curtis
You've described so beautifully the reasons why forgiveness is so vital to human relationships, and to one's relationship with God. If we can't offer sincere forgiveness or accept it, our lives will be tainted by hate and anger. Who wants that? I'm rambling a bit, I know, but I just want to say the poem is fantastic, and I hope you win!
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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You've described so beautifully the reasons why forgiveness is so vital to human relationships, and to one's relationship with God. If we can't offer sincere forgiveness or accept it, our lives will be tainted by hate and anger. Who wants that? I'm rambling a bit, I know, but I just want to say the poem is fantastic, and I hope you win!
Comment Written 26-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Wow! thank you very much for your wonderful review****kahpot
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Cybertron1986
Such an uplifting and inspirational piece. I find it both elegant in presentation and meaning. The last phrase, "So together we'll join that road to forgiveness" is what struck that emotional note in me. Beautiful through and through
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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018
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Such an uplifting and inspirational piece. I find it both elegant in presentation and meaning. The last phrase, "So together we'll join that road to forgiveness" is what struck that emotional note in me. Beautiful through and through
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Comment Written 26-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much for your wonderful review****kahpot