Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Exceptional

Music was fantastic and fit perfectaly. so did the cemetery pictures.
The piece was perfect as only you can do. I would expect nothing less from you. flowed perfectaly and rhyme was spot on. A hit with me.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013

Thank you, Barb, I really do appreciate that. Your wonderful encouragement and fantastic feedback is a great source of inspiration for me...

I truly am very grateful, my friend!

Comment from pipersfancy

Excellent

Enjoying the season, Dean? Too creepy, Mr. Kuch... too creepy! You never fail to send shivers down my spine! Another well-written look at the frightful and macabre!

PF

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013

Thanks, pipe...I think, LOL...

Seriously, I really do appreciate the read AND the fabulous review!

reply by pipersfancy on 23-Oct-2013

Oh... I know... as do I, my friend, as do I!

(Up North working this week... Off to save the world now!)

Later!
PF

Comment from mystery poet

Excellent

WOOOOOOOOOoooooooo!!!
This is an eerie Halloween delight.
The story is in frightening legend style that
seems to churn it's way to the surface at this
dark time of the year.
A creepy crypt dark with doom is always enjoyed
by those who enjoy a scary story.
The notes you left for the reader describes how
many of these ghost stories got their beginning.
The music was equally eerie...Thanks for the
treat!

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013

Thanks mystery poet. I am very grateful for your wonderful review.

reply by mystery poet on 23-Oct-2013

My pleasure!
LOL::}}Joyce

Comment from joneau2

Excellent

A very spooky Halloween tale, well done, as always. I can only heap praise upon you ... your writing and story telling skills are incredible. A happy Halloween to you.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013

And a very warm and Happy Halloween to you, as well, joneau2. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

Good complimentary photo as well as an eye catching back ground. Good use of the aabb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming and perfect rhyming with hill/mill...craves/graves...dawn/lawn...waste/taste. Chilling sound effects. Good alliteration and descriptive. Clear and chilling message.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013

Thanks, RR. Much appreciated.

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Having more or less had my fill of Halloween poems for the season, I nearly passed this by! Glad I didn't! It's a wonderful tale, expertly told. You certainly manage to keep the suspense and tension running. Lovely surprise twist at the end. Interesting notes, too. A great read on this rather wild and wet afternoon!

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013

Thanks, my friend. I am glad you decided to stop and read it too, LOL!

Thanks for the great review, 'T'...

Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

I'm always impressed by your author's notes as well as your poem. Thank you for the history.

Your poem's quatrains rhyme well and have perfectly even tempo.

I'm stay out of cemeteries. Always have.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013

I'd would advise you do just that, especially Harker's Mill, BD.

Thanks for the wonderful review!

Comment from Uniqusatya

Excellent

Wow, i very much liked your artwork which has woven the mystic atmosphere for your work.Thanks for the author notes to take us in the right dirction.Good read.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013

Thanks very much, Uniqusatya. I am very grateful for the review...

Comment from Tomes Johnston

Excellent

This is another macabre and sinister poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. I find it interesting that there are several stories about the Devil appearing at various places around the world.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013

Thanks very much, Tomes. As always, I do appreciate it.

reply by Tomes Johnston on 23-Oct-2013

My pleasure.

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

I USED TO PLAY IN THE GRAVE YARD AND DIG WORMS WHERE THE USED TO LIVE YEARS AGO. THE CARETAKER WOULD THROW ALL THE OLD FLOWERS IN A PILE AND THE THEY WOULD DIE AND FEED THE WORMS GATHERED THERE.
I WANTED TO SAY THAT I ENJOYED YOUR POEM , HE HAD PLANS FOR THE OLD GAL BUT TURNED UP TO BE HER SUPPER INSTEAD LOL

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013

Hah, you've got that right, country ranch writer! He wanted a taste but gave one up himself, LOL...

Thanks for the great review!