Trouble at the Pole
Claus and wife get into strife44 total reviews
Comment from tfawcus
Very good! Some brilliant rhyming - GPS'd it was inspired! I hope the old fellow manages to talk his way out of trouble before this time next year. A wife like that would be enough to drive anyone to drink!
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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Very good! Some brilliant rhyming - GPS'd it was inspired! I hope the old fellow manages to talk his way out of trouble before this time next year. A wife like that would be enough to drive anyone to drink!
Comment Written 25-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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Thanks, Tony, for the kind words and the sixer.
Seems male and female reviewers are split over who's really at fault...
Have a safe and happy new year.
Steve
Comment from CallieWVU2
I really liked the originality here, I thought it was very clever and creative, and even though I'm a lover of animals the idea of the reindeer skinned got a bit of a bitter chuckle from me :) Good poem, thank you for sharing. Happy Holidays!
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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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I really liked the originality here, I thought it was very clever and creative, and even though I'm a lover of animals the idea of the reindeer skinned got a bit of a bitter chuckle from me :) Good poem, thank you for sharing. Happy Holidays!
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Comment Written 25-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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Callie, thanks for reviewing - sorry for the chamois line, but hey, we've all got to polish our cars with something...
Have a safe and happy new year.
Steve
Comment from Bill Schott
Hysterical poem about Santa. This one could rival those we hear each year on the radio. Maybe you can put it to music and make an annual check. Nice job.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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Hysterical poem about Santa. This one could rival those we hear each year on the radio. Maybe you can put it to music and make an annual check. Nice job.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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Thanks, Bill - the annual check sounds nice!
Have a safe and happy new year.
Steve
Comment from AnnaLinda
kiwisteveh,
This Christmas poem and entry was a delight to read.
You are very talented and I enjoyed your internal
rhymes and end rhymes and found your story of
Santa's drinking binge to be very entertaining.
I don't blame Mrs. Sandy Claus for being upset...
what a shame about the divorce though:) I really
loved the lines below:
Prioritise and organise; his system was pathetic.
Make sure you stack from front to back, and make it alphabetic."
Thanks for a great Christmas treat and Merry Christmas!
Linda
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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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kiwisteveh,
This Christmas poem and entry was a delight to read.
You are very talented and I enjoyed your internal
rhymes and end rhymes and found your story of
Santa's drinking binge to be very entertaining.
I don't blame Mrs. Sandy Claus for being upset...
what a shame about the divorce though:) I really
loved the lines below:
Prioritise and organise; his system was pathetic.
Make sure you stack from front to back, and make it alphabetic."
Thanks for a great Christmas treat and Merry Christmas!
Linda
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Comment Written 25-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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Linda, thanks a lot for the kind words and the Christmas wishes.
Have a safe and happy new year.
Steve