Comment from Alan K Pease

Exceptional

Sometimes I feel like a lost child especially when I am racking my mind figuring out what to buy for my Grandchildren's Christmas -things that are both interesting and educational for a child of their age - 3 yrs, 4 yrs, 6 yrs, and 17yrs ( 2 families ). Merry Christmas to you and yours. Clever poem

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

Thanks Alan for the wonderful review, words and great stars,

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

Short sweet and really funny
Even you will deduce
in her tank there's no juice
Oh boy! How wrong can you be. Can you get more funny thn this??
Good use of rhymed couplets with the 3rd and 6th lies rhyming
Wish you all the best in the contest

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

Thank you for the great review and comments

Comment from billmetz

Excellent

This is very nice, made me giggle. Like the rhyme sequence. I like the part about her needing glasses. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

Thank you so much for this great review and comments

Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

Well, I believe you stated this clearly as a nonsensical piece of poetic art. Still, it is a very good write that has some good humor in its thoughts. I enjoyed reading this well written piece of poetic art... John

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

Thanks John for this great review, my friend

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

Very silly and humorous. I love the way you have presented this poem. It is exactly what the "nonsense poetry" contest is all about. Great job!

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

Thank you for this great review and comments,

Comment from thee-name

Excellent

Excellent poem. Writing was funny.
OH, OUR DARLING MISS MUFFET
THINKING SHE WAS A PUPPIT
PLAINLY NEEDS GLASSES TO SEE;

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

Thanks for the lovely review and comments.

reply by thee-name on 24-Dec-2014

THANK YOU!

Comment from dragonpoet

Good

This is funny in a way. She is a bit blind, I agree. In then end are you saying she knew all along?

Keep writing.

dragonpoet

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 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

Er no! Thanks for the review and taking the time, what is the problem?

reply by dragonpoet on 25-Dec-2014

You're welcome, Roy.

Joan

Comment from Lulube

Excellent

cute and well penned. Yes I laughed at this one, cleverly worded, eg. her tank has no juice. lol

good rhyming and good flow to the read
good luck in the contest

Merry
X'mas
and all the best in the New Year

lulube

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

Thanks Lu for this lovely review and comments,

reply by Lulube on 24-Dec-2014

welcome

lulube

Comment from RPSaxena

Excellent

Hello Friend,
It's funny due to its being nonsense.
It fulfills the required norms.
Wording is simple and perfectly matching with the theme.
Smooth flow with nice rhyming scheme and lively imagery.
Good Luck!

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

Thanks RP for the the great review and comments,

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Adoption leaves the reciplicant uneasy until they can assimilate with their adoptive parents. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

Thanks Charlie, for this great review and comments,

reply by c_lucas on 24-Dec-2014

You're welcome, Sasha. Charlie