A Picture's Worth a Thousand Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Some Days: A PictaPoem"A compilation of pictapoems from my portfolio
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Comment from nancy_e_davis
Wow, it took this forever to load. You need to swap him out for a nice lovely girl muse. Nah, I can't see you writing hearts and flowers. LOL The pictures are very scary. I would be insane if I had to out up with him. Good luck with that! Nancy
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Wow, it took this forever to load. You need to swap him out for a nice lovely girl muse. Nah, I can't see you writing hearts and flowers. LOL The pictures are very scary. I would be insane if I had to out up with him. Good luck with that! Nancy
Comment Written 11-May-2014
Comment from Leineco
It would be nice for some advice
a simple idea, or two
He smiles and says, cold as ice
I'll leave that up to you
I see your muse is much like mine. . .happy to help out with the details, but never there with the catalyst! Gnawing away for a bone to chew - but useless in the hunt for raw meat.
Mine's not quite as "aggressive" as yours, but boy does he know how to aggravate me! LOL
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It would be nice for some advice
a simple idea, or two
He smiles and says, cold as ice
I'll leave that up to you
I see your muse is much like mine. . .happy to help out with the details, but never there with the catalyst! Gnawing away for a bone to chew - but useless in the hunt for raw meat.
Mine's not quite as "aggressive" as yours, but boy does he know how to aggravate me! LOL
Comment Written 11-May-2014
Comment from MizKat
Hi Dean,
You poem is written well and tells a nice little poetic story. I don't believe in muses at all so I wouldn't know if they're traditionally female or not. Anyway, I liked the read.
Kat
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Hi Dean,
You poem is written well and tells a nice little poetic story. I don't believe in muses at all so I wouldn't know if they're traditionally female or not. Anyway, I liked the read.
Kat
Comment Written 11-May-2014
Comment from lancellot
Great, and very spooky too. I like the rhyme, the message and the music. You have combine several different sensory input to create a small masterpiece. How do you come up with these. Oh, that's right, you have an evil muse.
Well done.
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Great, and very spooky too. I like the rhyme, the message and the music. You have combine several different sensory input to create a small masterpiece. How do you come up with these. Oh, that's right, you have an evil muse.
Well done.
Comment Written 11-May-2014
Comment from Kingsland
A lot of muses are hard to handle and very critical of the writer for whom they work for. In other words, muses can be a pain in the ass. I enjoyed reading this excellent piece of poetic art. It was well written in a very good format.
You need to get an inanimate muse. Like one of my muses is music. It doesn't talk back and I don't have to put up with any nonsense... John
reply by the author on 11-May-2014
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A lot of muses are hard to handle and very critical of the writer for whom they work for. In other words, muses can be a pain in the ass. I enjoyed reading this excellent piece of poetic art. It was well written in a very good format.
You need to get an inanimate muse. Like one of my muses is music. It doesn't talk back and I don't have to put up with any nonsense... John
Comment Written 11-May-2014
reply by the author on 11-May-2014
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Hah ha, yes John, I agree with you my friend. He is what he is, and he's relentlessly unstoppable at times. On those rare occasions when he does take a hiatus, I'm able to get in touch with my spiritual, more tender side. Unfortunately, those times are very rare.
Thanks for the excellent and entertaining review, John. It is always a pleasure to hear from you.
Comment from casini
It's good but I not scared my muse is more horrific it does let me sleep but when I wake up find myself sleeping in the midst of pigs. Just joking Pl don't mind. Loved reading your thoughts.
reply by the author on 11-May-2014
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It's good but I not scared my muse is more horrific it does let me sleep but when I wake up find myself sleeping in the midst of pigs. Just joking Pl don't mind. Loved reading your thoughts.
Comment Written 11-May-2014
reply by the author on 11-May-2014
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Hah, well, our house is often referred to as a pig sty by my lovely wife, so I can relate completely with you there, casini, LOL.
Thanks for the kind and entertaining review, my friend!
Comment from Sasha
Ahh, I agree, who said a muse has to be a woman???? Mine is transgender and quite confused. It is usually too busy trying to resolves its own problems than to offer any helpful suggestions for writing something new. Great presentation, just love the videos...very scary.
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Ahh, I agree, who said a muse has to be a woman???? Mine is transgender and quite confused. It is usually too busy trying to resolves its own problems than to offer any helpful suggestions for writing something new. Great presentation, just love the videos...very scary.
Comment Written 11-May-2014
Comment from c_lucas
But Dean, your readers know you're Demon Possess and would like to know if you will share your secrets of so many masterpieces. Does you muse walk around saying, "For evermore or interested in Electricity?" (LOL) Very well done.
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But Dean, your readers know you're Demon Possess and would like to know if you will share your secrets of so many masterpieces. Does you muse walk around saying, "For evermore or interested in Electricity?" (LOL) Very well done.
Comment Written 11-May-2014
Comment from Donya Quijote
Well, I'm my muse is merely fickle and not, ummm, so terrifying. Is it any wonder you don't sleep and why you write what it is you write. Oh the horror. You've got quite a devil there. You might try an exorcism if you want to be rid of him, but somehow I think your relationship symbiotic and not parasitic. Best of luck in gaining the upper hand. Very unique presentation...
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Well, I'm my muse is merely fickle and not, ummm, so terrifying. Is it any wonder you don't sleep and why you write what it is you write. Oh the horror. You've got quite a devil there. You might try an exorcism if you want to be rid of him, but somehow I think your relationship symbiotic and not parasitic. Best of luck in gaining the upper hand. Very unique presentation...
Comment Written 11-May-2014
Comment from alexgeorge
A Dean Kuch Pictapoem, hurrayyyyy! It's like visiting a movie threatre to watch a favourite film.
Love the pics, Dean, and who ever said that the muse should be a woman? Could be a man, a beast, as in this case.
Like a friend of mine is wont to write: 'pleasant screams'
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A Dean Kuch Pictapoem, hurrayyyyy! It's like visiting a movie threatre to watch a favourite film.
Love the pics, Dean, and who ever said that the muse should be a woman? Could be a man, a beast, as in this case.
Like a friend of mine is wont to write: 'pleasant screams'
Comment Written 11-May-2014