The Time I Have Left
Advise for making wise choices45 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
If everyone thought about the consequences of their actions, the world would be a much better place. Unfortunately, most are too selfish. I enjoyed and agree with your sentiments.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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If everyone thought about the consequences of their actions, the world would be a much better place. Unfortunately, most are too selfish. I enjoyed and agree with your sentiments.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your thoughtful comments.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Beautifully and sensitively said in your well crafted, rhyming couplets! I love that message at the start of the year (and, for that matter, as a rule of thumb). Your last two lines are superb. I'm just so sorry I can't give you more, Nomi. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Beautifully and sensitively said in your well crafted, rhyming couplets! I love that message at the start of the year (and, for that matter, as a rule of thumb). Your last two lines are superb. I'm just so sorry I can't give you more, Nomi. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Thank you. To know that what you express in poetry is accepted by your audience is much more meaningful than a high rating to me.
Comment from Janis M.
There is good meter and flow. On all technical aspects there isn't anything to improve. The rhymes match with the meter at the ends as well.
I think the only theological comment I would make is perhaps writing the evil we display instead of some display.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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There is good meter and flow. On all technical aspects there isn't anything to improve. The rhymes match with the meter at the ends as well.
I think the only theological comment I would make is perhaps writing the evil we display instead of some display.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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You are correct, of course. While some of us are more evil than others, none of us have room to brag or to feel superior.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Our decisions should be wise ones as we are older as we become slower to react and weaker in body and mind. We often think we can do something, but when it comes to the action we can no longer do what we did in our youth. Observing nature and being appreciative of life is a good way to live, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Our decisions should be wise ones as we are older as we become slower to react and weaker in body and mind. We often think we can do something, but when it comes to the action we can no longer do what we did in our youth. Observing nature and being appreciative of life is a good way to live, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Dolly. I am so pleased that you get me. Your approval means the world to me.
Comment from Navada
I think this is a really valuable reminder for all of us to maximise our gifts and talents while we have the opportunity. I like the imagery and examples you've used here to convey your message. :)
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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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I think this is a really valuable reminder for all of us to maximise our gifts and talents while we have the opportunity. I like the imagery and examples you've used here to convey your message. :)
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Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much. I look forward to communicating with you in future.
