Molly is Moving
Making new memories45 total reviews
Comment from Monica Chaddick
This is a really cute poem, and a great way to help a child with the anxiety of moving. There were a couple of places where it seemed like the rhyme was a bit forced, which mildly affected the flow, but not enough to curb the enjoyment of the piece. Good job!
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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This is a really cute poem, and a great way to help a child with the anxiety of moving. There were a couple of places where it seemed like the rhyme was a bit forced, which mildly affected the flow, but not enough to curb the enjoyment of the piece. Good job!
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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Thank you! I appreciate your feedback.
Comment from Douglas Goff
This is a really great children's poem entry. Contest aside, I think it could really help to soothe an anxious child who is preparing to move.
Great writing and thanks for sharing
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reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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This is a really great children's poem entry. Contest aside, I think it could really help to soothe an anxious child who is preparing to move.
Great writing and thanks for sharing
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Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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Thank you so much! I appreciate that! Xo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I live this well rhymed and metered poem, full of fun an skilfully written, a fine post for the contest, the best entry I have read so far, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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I live this well rhymed and metered poem, full of fun an skilfully written, a fine post for the contest, the best entry I have read so far, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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Thank you, Dolly! I appreciate your feedback! Xo
Comment from RodG
This poem will definitely appeal to any young reader whose family moved from one house to another. Especially poignant are the scenes of Molly trying to take things with her. And a child will like the happy ending where Molly likes her new home a lot. Rod
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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This poem will definitely appeal to any young reader whose family moved from one house to another. Especially poignant are the scenes of Molly trying to take things with her. And a child will like the happy ending where Molly likes her new home a lot. Rod
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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Thank you so much, Rod! I appreciate that! Xo
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
I really enjoyed reading your lovely rhymed poem. You certainly hit the brief.
Well paced and good balance.
I like how you dealt with the issue of uncertainty and change.
Grown ups feel apprehensive and scared too sometimes - lets deal with it together!
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
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reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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Hello :)
I really enjoyed reading your lovely rhymed poem. You certainly hit the brief.
Well paced and good balance.
I like how you dealt with the issue of uncertainty and change.
Grown ups feel apprehensive and scared too sometimes - lets deal with it together!
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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Thank you so much, Debra! I appreciate that! Xo