What Does the Wind Say?
ABC's as the wind says them.36 total reviews
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Tina!
I enjoyed reading your poetic offering! Creative and interesting! Would be a wonderful exercise for students to pursue regarding a topic in nature!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Hello Tina!
I enjoyed reading your poetic offering! Creative and interesting! Would be a wonderful exercise for students to pursue regarding a topic in nature!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Hi Diane! That's a good idea. I have teacher friends to whom I may suggest it. Thank you for reviewing!
Blessings!
Tina
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Hi Diane! That's a good idea. I have teacher friends to whom I may suggest it. Thank you for reviewing!
Blessings!
Tina
Comment from Gloria ....
Gee this is good and I really enjoyed your explanation that the wind is having a bit too much fun.
Each word you've used to illustrate the wind is strong and draws your reader through the ups and downs and twists and turns.
A fine, fine alphabet poem:))
Gloria
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Gee this is good and I really enjoyed your explanation that the wind is having a bit too much fun.
Each word you've used to illustrate the wind is strong and draws your reader through the ups and downs and twists and turns.
A fine, fine alphabet poem:))
Gloria
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Thank you Gloria. I am glad you got the feel I was going for...always moving!
I need to head over and check out your portfolio. I've been gone awhile!
Tina
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Thank you Gloria. I am glad you got the feel I was going for...always moving!
I need to head over and check out your portfolio. I've been gone awhile!
Tina
Comment from LisaMay
The twists and turns in your poem, with its creative energy from effortless currents to furious velocity, all described with personification in rich alliterative phrases, delighted me when I read and re-read it. Today, it is windy here too - I hope it doesn't huff and hurry too much because I prefer it when birds can do a drifter dance now and zen.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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The twists and turns in your poem, with its creative energy from effortless currents to furious velocity, all described with personification in rich alliterative phrases, delighted me when I read and re-read it. Today, it is windy here too - I hope it doesn't huff and hurry too much because I prefer it when birds can do a drifter dance now and zen.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Wow...I am a bit shocked! Thank you! I'm honored too...it was so fun to do! I rather the wind has so much fun! Thanks! I'm happy:)
You did that!
Comment from Wils
A very cleverly written piece. It formed an image in my mind of the wind doing its thing. If you can do that to a reader then you've written something good.
Geoff
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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A very cleverly written piece. It formed an image in my mind of the wind doing its thing. If you can do that to a reader then you've written something good.
Geoff
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Geoff...thank you so much! I'm honored you liked my poem!
Have a great day because you made mine!
Tina
Comment from innmint
I loved this creative poem! The imagery in your writing was very well done. I can imagine a windy day with the lines, "Grow, Gale and Gust! Heed my Huff, my Hurry." Thank you!
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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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I loved this creative poem! The imagery in your writing was very well done. I can imagine a windy day with the lines, "Grow, Gale and Gust! Heed my Huff, my Hurry." Thank you!
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Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Aww.... You're welcome! Its I who thank YOU. This was a fun one but honestly took some work to get the feel right. You make it worth the effort when you like it:)
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
I love your awesome, beautiful, creative, delightful poem about the wind! You've really gone over the top with words of colorful description and diverse action, and you were clearly inspired. I just enjoyed following your lines from A down to Z, fantastic!
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I love your awesome, beautiful, creative, delightful poem about the wind! You've really gone over the top with words of colorful description and diverse action, and you were clearly inspired. I just enjoyed following your lines from A down to Z, fantastic!
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Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much!!! It was fun to do...and you are perceptive...I was I soured by the wind!
Have a great evening!:)
Tina
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You're very welcome!
