This Time - That Time 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "The Powers-That-Be Are Perturbed"Third book in the time travel trilogy
33 total reviews
Comment from Mrs. KT
Good Morning, Sandra!
Another excellent read filled with keen dialogue and humor! I smiled when reading the conversation among the "Powers-That-Be" as well as the comment that Amelia made to Martha, "We'll put something solid in that skinny frame of yours. All it would take is one patient to sneeze and you'd be blown over."
Am so looking forward for the "spooky" to begin! :)
Take Care!
diane
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
  |
Good Morning, Sandra!
Another excellent read filled with keen dialogue and humor! I smiled when reading the conversation among the "Powers-That-Be" as well as the comment that Amelia made to Martha, "We'll put something solid in that skinny frame of yours. All it would take is one patient to sneeze and you'd be blown over."
Am so looking forward for the "spooky" to begin! :)
Take Care!
diane
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
-
Thank you so very much for the wonderful six stars, Diane, and the loverly review to go with it. It's really nice to know you are enjoying the story, and the conversations, thank you, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from royowen
The powers that be are discussing the situation with Mildred, and decide that she should be allowed to carry out the present course that she's on. The surprising this that Veronica never feels hungry or tired, but they start concocting a plan to make aware to Amelia, that Gladys he's been murdered, and a ghost, but to protect Amelia by planting a letter elsewhere to protect her. Well done, Sandra, blessings Roy f
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
 |
The powers that be are discussing the situation with Mildred, and decide that she should be allowed to carry out the present course that she's on. The surprising this that Veronica never feels hungry or tired, but they start concocting a plan to make aware to Amelia, that Gladys he's been murdered, and a ghost, but to protect Amelia by planting a letter elsewhere to protect her. Well done, Sandra, blessings Roy f
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
-
Thank you so very much for another of your lovely reviews, Roy. Now they have to put their plan into action. I hope it works! :)) Sandra xxx
-
Me too Sandra,
Comment from tfawcus
Another very good chapter. I was also wondering what the implications might be of a love affair across time shifts. That could be a hard one to resolve.
The incidental details you include while these characters are talking amongst themselves make the scenes really come to life.
I've a number of minor suggestions for you to consider:
I (just) didn't foresee that coming at all,
in as much as (inasmuch as)
a situation like this with Mildred(,) as she's always lived her lives for the people she's been sent to help.
Her nimble fingers (easily) created the most delightful little rosebuds with (her) tiny neat stitches.
just as she was about to speak, she managed to catch herself (in time) and clamped her mouth shut
a frown, layered with concern, coated (crossed?) her face.
Just mentioning Tommy was enough to brighten her face (, though).
accusing him of yours and possibly her murder
(accusing him of your murder and possibly hers)
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
|
Another very good chapter. I was also wondering what the implications might be of a love affair across time shifts. That could be a hard one to resolve.
The incidental details you include while these characters are talking amongst themselves make the scenes really come to life.
I've a number of minor suggestions for you to consider:
I (just) didn't foresee that coming at all,
in as much as (inasmuch as)
a situation like this with Mildred(,) as she's always lived her lives for the people she's been sent to help.
Her nimble fingers (easily) created the most delightful little rosebuds with (her) tiny neat stitches.
just as she was about to speak, she managed to catch herself (in time) and clamped her mouth shut
a frown, layered with concern, coated (crossed?) her face.
Just mentioning Tommy was enough to brighten her face (, though).
accusing him of yours and possibly her murder
(accusing him of your murder and possibly hers)
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
-
Thank you so much for this helpful review, Tony. I'm going to copy and paste them to my MS Word copy and go through them. There are some excellent suggestions here that I really appreciate. It's wonderful what a good pair of fresh eyes can see! :)) Thanks for this and the six stars, my friend, I truly do appreciate it all. Sandra xx