This Time - That Time 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Veronica Tries To Get Help"Third book in the time travel trilogy
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Comment from SLMorrical
This is a very good edition to the book. I like that you put that Veronica was not solid and Mildred was. I have a question on one sentence -- Hospital were built, isn't it was built? Now Veronica is in a pickle. I agree the two together are invisible. Veronica is going to have to tell Mildred about the dressmakers. Then Mildred can continue to get the people out of the hospital.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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This is a very good edition to the book. I like that you put that Veronica was not solid and Mildred was. I have a question on one sentence -- Hospital were built, isn't it was built? Now Veronica is in a pickle. I agree the two together are invisible. Veronica is going to have to tell Mildred about the dressmakers. Then Mildred can continue to get the people out of the hospital.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much, Sandra, for this lovely review, and all those lovely stars!!! Yes, you are quite right, it should be, 'was built' but I'm afraid Mildred just will not listen to me and she won't change her dialect for me or anyone!! What can I do? LOL, sorry, my friend. It's just the way Mildred speaks. You'll get used to her, I hope! Thank you again, my friend. :)) Sandra xx x
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LOL on Mildred speaking.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Go back and tell Mildred what you found, silly. Don't just stand there gawking.
Poor Veronica. Why do the PTB expect her to figure out everything, when they could just tell her what to do. For that matter, why do they have to interfere with her life at all? Can't THEY take care any timeline problems? Isn't that their job? I'm really getting angry with them now.
I like the physical design of the tunnels I see in my mind. Spooooky and fun. :)
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Go back and tell Mildred what you found, silly. Don't just stand there gawking.
Poor Veronica. Why do the PTB expect her to figure out everything, when they could just tell her what to do. For that matter, why do they have to interfere with her life at all? Can't THEY take care any timeline problems? Isn't that their job? I'm really getting angry with them now.
I like the physical design of the tunnels I see in my mind. Spooooky and fun. :)
Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Yes, Veronica could do that, but Mildred can't get through the metal door! The powers are making Veronica so angry, I think they'd be safer out of her way. I'm glad you like the tunnels. There are thousands of miles of these tunnels, zig-zagging underneath London's roads and buildings, that were started in the early 1800s. I expect American towns are the same. Thank you so very much for the shiny six stars, my dear friend. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part. Big hugs! :)) Sandra xx
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Oh Man, Now you have me upset. What are they going to do. The thought of losing oxygen literally terrorizes me because I am on oxygen 24/7. That would be a good time for the powers that be to turn Veronica back to flesh and bone so she can open the door and save all those people! I see no other way. Exciting chapter Sandra. Well done. Hugs. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Oh Man, Now you have me upset. What are they going to do. The thought of losing oxygen literally terrorizes me because I am on oxygen 24/7. That would be a good time for the powers that be to turn Veronica back to flesh and bone so she can open the door and save all those people! I see no other way. Exciting chapter Sandra. Well done. Hugs. Nancy:)
Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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I'm so sorry, Nancy, I know what you mean though. My mum lived on oxygen the way you are for the last years of her life.I can imagine how terrifying it is. Right, back to the review. The powers are really making Veronica angry at the moment, I'm sure if she was to meet them, she'd give them a piece of her mind. Hmm, now that would be a good chapter!!! Don't give up on her yet, my friend. You should know Veronica by now. :)) Thank you so much for the six lovely stars, my dear friend, and this wonderful review. Big hugs, my friend. Sandra xxxx
Comment from prettybluebirds
The dialect is cool and adds much to the story. The dialogue is very believable and carries the novel forward at a terrific pace. I enjoyed this story immensely and will watch for more of the same. Nicely written.
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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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The dialect is cool and adds much to the story. The dialogue is very believable and carries the novel forward at a terrific pace. I enjoyed this story immensely and will watch for more of the same. Nicely written.
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Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for this lovely review. Mildred is the centre of this story, and everyone loves her. I'm glad you like her too. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from alexisleech
You manage to pump up the tension so well, Sandra! Now everyone will be chewing their nails and wondering if Veronica can find a way to communicate with someone to save everyone being smoked to death in the passageway. Bravo, my friend - I can't wait for the next chapter!
Alexis xxx
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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You manage to pump up the tension so well, Sandra! Now everyone will be chewing their nails and wondering if Veronica can find a way to communicate with someone to save everyone being smoked to death in the passageway. Bravo, my friend - I can't wait for the next chapter!
Alexis xxx
Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much, Alexis, for this wonderful review and the stunning starlight! I'm so pleased you like this story, it's great to know that people want to read more. Thanks, my friend. Big hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from Douglas Paul
This chapter was intense and riveting. I can sense the tension in the story. AS always, your words flow smoothly with clear imagery. Very well done, my friend
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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This chapter was intense and riveting. I can sense the tension in the story. AS always, your words flow smoothly with clear imagery. Very well done, my friend
Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Bless your heart. Douglas, you gave me my first review and a six to go with it! Thank you so very much, my friend. I'm delighted you enjoyed it. I have a big smile on my face. :)) Big hugs, Sandra xxx