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Acrostic-Loop poem41 total reviews
Comment from Boogienights
I like this contest entry and how you decided to format it. I think when an artist paints, sculpts or writes they of course put their own interpretation on the work. I also think though that they hope that the viewer or reader will take away their own perspective on it. Thanks for sharing this work, it makes you think.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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I like this contest entry and how you decided to format it. I think when an artist paints, sculpts or writes they of course put their own interpretation on the work. I also think though that they hope that the viewer or reader will take away their own perspective on it. Thanks for sharing this work, it makes you think.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thank you and that is what I was trying to say, many thanks for our understanding review****kahpot
Comment from victor 66
"Comprehension" is a funny word. It's like the word "Art", all I can tell you is, I don't always know what's good but I know what I like. I try to comprehend, I try to understand art forms but it I'm just not that sophisticated. Hope you're not offended, but I liked your poem. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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"Comprehension" is a funny word. It's like the word "Art", all I can tell you is, I don't always know what's good but I know what I like. I try to comprehend, I try to understand art forms but it I'm just not that sophisticated. Hope you're not offended, but I liked your poem. Best wishes.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Any comments are very much welcomed I would never be offended it all helps us to learn, thank you very much a very welcome and honest review****kahpot
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You are most welcome, my friend.
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your interpretation of the prompt and your creatively combining the Loop form with an acrostic. I found the idea of "Time traveling words" very appealing. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
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I admired your interpretation of the prompt and your creatively combining the Loop form with an acrostic. I found the idea of "Time traveling words" very appealing. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much for your encouraging review****kahpot
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is a very good example of a difficult style of poetry. I tried to write one in this style, but I was told KJSDI EYGDHHDDJ isn't a word, so I guess I can't.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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This is a very good example of a difficult style of poetry. I tried to write one in this style, but I was told KJSDI EYGDHHDDJ isn't a word, so I guess I can't.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much and yes I guess I am just amusing myself while trying to learn****kahpot
Comment from meeshu
I can really appreciate the message in this poem, Kahpot. just as an aside if that room was in my house I would be even more insane............meeshu
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I can really appreciate the message in this poem, Kahpot. just as an aside if that room was in my house I would be even more insane............meeshu
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
Wow! I'm impressed with the acrostic AND loop poem in so few lines that also encourages the authors here to keep their efforts with their "time traveling words." Best wishes on the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Wow! I'm impressed with the acrostic AND loop poem in so few lines that also encourages the authors here to keep their efforts with their "time traveling words." Best wishes on the contest!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Raul1
Interesting. I wish there was a time machine that can change some of my negative events in my life to change it into a positive, but hey it's over now. Anyway time traveling won't ever be possible. People change and before they were lost souls. Correct! Time machines are for making it to movies. Good luck in the contest! The poem has no mistakes.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Interesting. I wish there was a time machine that can change some of my negative events in my life to change it into a positive, but hey it's over now. Anyway time traveling won't ever be possible. People change and before they were lost souls. Correct! Time machines are for making it to movies. Good luck in the contest! The poem has no mistakes.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thank you I was trying to say that the artist's words travel in time- Shakespeare his words have traveled many years into the future****kahpot
Comment from Lady Jane
Ok, this is a unique penning. I loved the way you used the last word of each sentence to begin as first word in next sentence. Is this a specific style? Anyways, it flowed so well and didn't feel choppy or forced. That's a feat for any writer. Great job. Loved this. Good luck in the contest.
Janelle
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Ok, this is a unique penning. I loved the way you used the last word of each sentence to begin as first word in next sentence. Is this a specific style? Anyways, it flowed so well and didn't feel choppy or forced. That's a feat for any writer. Great job. Loved this. Good luck in the contest.
Janelle
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much, using the last word to form the first of the next line is a Loop poem I combined this with the Acrostic poem****kahpot
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Clever, very clever. I wondered if it wasn't the loop, but the acrostic threw me off. Well done!
Janelle
Comment from Gloria ....
Oh my land, kahpot, this is brilliant. Not only did you write to the contest specifications you also wrote an acrostic and a loop poem all in one. Hey, three for the price of one.
Most inventive and ambitious and I wish you great luck in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Oh my land, kahpot, this is brilliant. Not only did you write to the contest specifications you also wrote an acrostic and a loop poem all in one. Hey, three for the price of one.
Most inventive and ambitious and I wish you great luck in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 13-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much, I have very inspirational teachers****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A clever poem which is both acrostic and loop! The neverending story of poets writing thoughts and ruffling feathers and reaching our hearts and minds with words, a thoughtful poem, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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A clever poem which is both acrostic and loop! The neverending story of poets writing thoughts and ruffling feathers and reaching our hearts and minds with words, a thoughtful poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thank you for your very encouraging review****kahpot