Brelynn
Miracles still Happen (please read authors note before reading poem)57 total reviews
Comment from Liberty Justice
Lovely rendition of expectation of grandchild. Everybody getting ready for arrival. One feel s the joy and excitement if new baby. Nice! View mine also. liberty justice
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Lovely rendition of expectation of grandchild. Everybody getting ready for arrival. One feel s the joy and excitement if new baby. Nice! View mine also. liberty justice
Comment Written 10-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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I must confess to you that writing is emotional for me. I have no idea why my writing is more emotional than most other areas of my life. As you may guess, Brelynn is more emotional to me than most of my writings! So it?s with a special sense of appreciation that I thank you for your wonderful five star review. It?s only been the last couple of years that I have attempted to write because I?ve never been encouraged to do so. I want to thank you so very much for your kind words of support, and the gentle words of correction. I need both to help make me the kind of writer with broad appeal. May God bless you! Your TEAMMATE in written communication .
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THANK YOU. You wrote a
dynamic thank you to me for
writing you a great review.
liberty justice
Embrace the love from above!
Comment from MirandaDJ
This is a lovely, true to life poem. It is always a lovely experience when a new baby is due to arrive. I sincerely hope this little one will be fine. It was an enjoyable read with a nice rhyme
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This is a lovely, true to life poem. It is always a lovely experience when a new baby is due to arrive. I sincerely hope this little one will be fine. It was an enjoyable read with a nice rhyme
Comment Written 10-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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I must confess to you that writing is emotional for me. I have no idea why my writing is more emotional than most other areas of my life. As you may guess, Brelynn is more emotional to me than most of my writings! So it?s with a special sense of appreciation that I thank you for your wonderful five star review. It?s only been the last couple of years that I have attempted to write because I?ve never been encouraged to do so. I want to thank you so very much for your kind words of support, and the gentle words of correction. I need both to help make me the kind of writer with broad appeal. May God bless you! Your TEAMMATE in written communication .
Comment from Selina Stambi
Hello excited grandma-to-be,
the lines of your poem ooze with anticipation and excitement. I sense your joy and share in it.
Nice rhyme scheme.
until uncle Jadon;... I guess this means Uncle Jadon made the announcement? This line is a weeny bit ambiguous.
God bless mother-to-be and baby. And you, too, dear Grandma! Best wishes for the contest.
Love,
Sonali :)
When they knew there babe was in route ... did you mean 'en route'?
It may be good to make an author note that in US English 'route' rhymes with shout. In British/Canadian/ Australian, 'route' is pronounced 'root'.
This way, you protect yourself from unnecessary critical brickbats!
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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Hello excited grandma-to-be,
the lines of your poem ooze with anticipation and excitement. I sense your joy and share in it.
Nice rhyme scheme.
until uncle Jadon;... I guess this means Uncle Jadon made the announcement? This line is a weeny bit ambiguous.
God bless mother-to-be and baby. And you, too, dear Grandma! Best wishes for the contest.
Love,
Sonali :)
When they knew there babe was in route ... did you mean 'en route'?
It may be good to make an author note that in US English 'route' rhymes with shout. In British/Canadian/ Australian, 'route' is pronounced 'root'.
This way, you protect yourself from unnecessary critical brickbats!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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You are exactly right. Jadon made the announcement on video and over 17,000 people have seen it. I must confess to you that writing is emotional for me. I have no idea why my writing is more emotional than most other areas of my life. As you may guess, Brelynn is more emotional to me than most of my writings! So it?s with a special sense of appreciation that I thank you for your wonderful five star review. It?s only been the last couple of years that I have attempted to write because I?ve never been encouraged to do so. I want to thank you so very much for your kind words of support, and the gentle words of correction. I need both to help make me the kind of writer with broad appeal. May God bless you! Your TEAMMATE in written communication .
Comment from VaV-VOOM
Awesome poetry obvious written by a true poet. This poem is only the second contest entry I have read so far, and I am so torn; with eight more to go. Just a beautiful piece; Thank you for sharing your feeling in such a fine way. Write On! VaV-VOOM!
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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Awesome poetry obvious written by a true poet. This poem is only the second contest entry I have read so far, and I am so torn; with eight more to go. Just a beautiful piece; Thank you for sharing your feeling in such a fine way. Write On! VaV-VOOM!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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I must confess to you that writing is emotional for me. I have no idea why my writing is more emotional than most other areas of my life. As you may guess, Brelynn is more emotional to me than most of my writings! So it?s with a special sense of appreciation that I thank you for your wonderful six star review. It?s only been the last couple of years that I have attempted to write because I?ve never been encouraged to do so. I want to thank you so very much for your kind words of support, and the gentle words of correction. I need both to help make me the kind of writer with broad appeal. May God bless you! Your TEAMMATE in written communication .
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You are very welcome Dr. Nad; I am a self taught poet, please read my bio. It will shine a little insight about me; I?m 57 and just started teaching myself grammar and punctuation; I taught my self to read on a dare when I was 16 years old. Now I just love words. On word can make or break a person if manipulated right. I think it?s the manipulation I enjoy most, but I don?t know for sure; all I know is I love words and poetry is a great way to release. Anyway it?s an awesome poem. Write On! VaV-VOOM!
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I did read your Bio and I applaud you for your courage to try new and wonderful things! I noticed in your portfolio that you have won or placed in a bunch of contests. Well Done Poet!
Embrace the love from above!
Comment from c_lucas
Now picking out gender is down to a science. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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Now picking out gender is down to a science. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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I must confess to you that writing is emotional for me. I have no idea why my writing is more emotional than most other areas of my life. As you may guess, Brelynn is more emotional to me than most of my writings! So it?s with a special sense of appreciation that I thank you for your wonderful five star review. It?s only been the last couple of years that I have attempted to write because I?ve never been encouraged to do so. I want to thank you so very much for your kind words of support, and the gentle words of correction. I need both to help make me the kind of writer with broad appeal. May God bless you! Your TEAMMATE in written communication .
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your story in a poem. The artwork is perfect. When paired with your words, they create a memorable poem. I like the author notes, although I did not have a problem with reading it without the bold words. Good job on the prompt & great rhyme.
Best wishes in the contest.
Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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I enjoyed your story in a poem. The artwork is perfect. When paired with your words, they create a memorable poem. I like the author notes, although I did not have a problem with reading it without the bold words. Good job on the prompt & great rhyme.
Best wishes in the contest.
Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 10-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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I must confess to you that writing is emotional for me. I have no idea why my writing is more emotional than most other areas of my life. As you may guess, Brelynn is more emotional to me than most of my writings! So it?s with a special sense of appreciation that I thank you for your wonderful five star review. It?s only been the last couple of years that I have attempted to write because I?ve never been encouraged to do so. I want to thank you so very much for your kind words of support, and the gentle words of correction. I need both to help make me the kind of writer with broad appeal. May God bless you! Your TEAMMATE in written communication .
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, poet,
What a wonderful poem about grandchildren. I have two granddaughters that are my pride and joy so I know how you feel.
I love this stanza:
At this point it's pins and needles,
arrival could be any day.
As a family we unite,
asking God to bless you. We pray!
It's so true! Good job, my friend.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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Hello, poet,
What a wonderful poem about grandchildren. I have two granddaughters that are my pride and joy so I know how you feel.
I love this stanza:
At this point it's pins and needles,
arrival could be any day.
As a family we unite,
asking God to bless you. We pray!
It's so true! Good job, my friend.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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I must confess to you that writing is emotional for me. I have no idea why my writing is more emotional than most other areas of my life. As you may guess, Brelynn is more emotional to me than most of my writings! So it?s with a special sense of appreciation that I thank you for your wonderful five star review. It?s only been the last couple of years that I have attempted to write because I?ve never been encouraged to do so. I want to thank you so very much for your kind words of support, and the gentle words of correction. I need both to help make me the kind of writer with broad appeal. May God bless you! Your TEAMMATE in written communication .
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Hello, for me writing is always emotional. You are welcome and let me know if there is anything I can do. :) Write on!
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Thank you for your kindness and encouraging words.
Embrace the love from above!
Comment from frogbook
1st best of luck for you and the baby. This was a touching and tender poem about the anticipation of the arrival and the faith and hardships too. I had no issues at all with the flow.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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1st best of luck for you and the baby. This was a touching and tender poem about the anticipation of the arrival and the faith and hardships too. I had no issues at all with the flow.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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I must confess to you that writing is emotional for me. I have no idea why my writing is more emotional than most other areas of my life. As you may guess, Brelynn is more emotional to me than most of my writings! So it?s with a special sense of appreciation that I thank you for your wonderful five star review. It?s only been the last couple of years that I have attempted to write because I?ve never been encouraged to do so. I want to thank you so very much for your kind words of support, and the gentle words of correction. I need both to help make me the kind of writer with broad appeal. May God bless you! Your TEAMMATE in written communication .
Comment from Leineco
What a joyful, emotion packed write :-)
The underlying excitement is palpable - and the use of bold font
did indeed improve finding the flow (just for kicks I copied
and pasted it to a blank sheet, then removed all the bold words - it
flows so much more naturally with the author directing the read :-)
Best of luck in the contest...AND with the imminent arrival :-)
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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What a joyful, emotion packed write :-)
The underlying excitement is palpable - and the use of bold font
did indeed improve finding the flow (just for kicks I copied
and pasted it to a blank sheet, then removed all the bold words - it
flows so much more naturally with the author directing the read :-)
Best of luck in the contest...AND with the imminent arrival :-)
Comment Written 10-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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I must confess to you that writing is emotional for me. I have no idea why my writing is more emotional than most other areas of my life. As you may guess, Brelynn is more emotional to me than most of my writings! So it?s with a special sense of appreciation that I thank you for your wonderful five star review. It?s only been the last couple of years that I have attempted to write because I?ve never been encouraged to do so. I want to thank you so very much for your kind words of support, and the gentle words of correction. I need both to help make me the kind of writer with broad appeal. May God bless you! Your TEAMMATE in written communication .
Comment from rjuselius
This is a brilliant entry for this particular writing prompt dear anonymous! I love the wait for the child. Such anticipation for something next to a miracle.
Thanks for sharing!
Good luck !
Blessings!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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This is a brilliant entry for this particular writing prompt dear anonymous! I love the wait for the child. Such anticipation for something next to a miracle.
Thanks for sharing!
Good luck !
Blessings!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 10-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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I must confess to you that writing is emotional for me. I have no idea why my writing is more emotional than most other areas of my life. As you may guess, Brelynn is more emotional to me than most of my writings! So it?s with a special sense of appreciation that I thank you for your wonderful five star review. It?s only been the last couple of years that I have attempted to write because I?ve never been encouraged to do so. I want to thank you so very much for your kind words of support, and the gentle words of correction. I need both to help make me the kind of writer with broad appeal. May God bless you! Your TEAMMATE in written communication .