As I Dance
Seeing the newness of color in me41 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your poem. I like how you wrote about the colors brightening your life in a way that was unexpected. I am glad that you saw the 'light' of His love and your days are better. [I am not assuming this is biographical].
Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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I enjoyed your poem. I like how you wrote about the colors brightening your life in a way that was unexpected. I am glad that you saw the 'light' of His love and your days are better. [I am not assuming this is biographical].
Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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Thanks for your dear insightful comments....because it was very much biographical.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely. You deliver a delightful spiritual piece and use the colors well in expressing the imagery of joy. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you for sharing it.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2015
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This meets the contest requirements nicely. You deliver a delightful spiritual piece and use the colors well in expressing the imagery of joy. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you for sharing it.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2015
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Thank you for such kind words.I appreciate your comments and insight. Blessings to you😊
Comment from Joy Graham
I enjoyed your rainbow ribbon dance :) It is a joyful dance filled with praise. It is inspiring to those of us who struggle. You took the rainbow theme and created a dance I would love to take part in. This is a fine contest entry and I wish you well!
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2015
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I enjoyed your rainbow ribbon dance :) It is a joyful dance filled with praise. It is inspiring to those of us who struggle. You took the rainbow theme and created a dance I would love to take part in. This is a fine contest entry and I wish you well!
Comment Written 11-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2015
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Thank you sincerely...You may join in the dance anytime! I would love it! You brought me joy today.
Comment from TPAC
Poet in this thought considering statement
reflect colors within their soul, playing
shades through personal emotions, requesting
direction of fate I felt the work insightful and
adequate in presentation
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2015
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Poet in this thought considering statement
reflect colors within their soul, playing
shades through personal emotions, requesting
direction of fate I felt the work insightful and
adequate in presentation
Comment Written 11-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2015
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Thank you for reading this and commenting. I appreciate what you said.
Comment from danpald
The splendor of the poem
Dance with hope that glows
For the new life has formed
With the colors of the rainbow
After a world filled with black
Evil colors too well stacked
God came and presented new colors to view
That are bright and bring new life that is true
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2015
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The splendor of the poem
Dance with hope that glows
For the new life has formed
With the colors of the rainbow
After a world filled with black
Evil colors too well stacked
God came and presented new colors to view
That are bright and bring new life that is true
Comment Written 11-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2015
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Oh what a joyful reply! You gave me such a gift today with your lovely poem!
Comment from pharp
A beautifully penned free verse. It has a very smooth flow which made for an easy and enjoyable read. I was really taken how your expressed the beauty of the different colors and their meanings. Excellent job and thanks so much for sharing; best wishes in the contest. Pharp
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2015
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A beautifully penned free verse. It has a very smooth flow which made for an easy and enjoyable read. I was really taken how your expressed the beauty of the different colors and their meanings. Excellent job and thanks so much for sharing; best wishes in the contest. Pharp
Comment Written 11-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2015
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Your words gave me a lift as I read them. Thank you for reading it and then writing them!
Comment from Janet7053
This is very nice. As a Christian, I too have been changed by His wonderful colors in my life. I wrote a poem about the red of His blood called The Crimson Flow.
Free verse affords you the ability to express yourself without many limitations.
I like the association of colors to items in our experiences. Ex: violet as His robe
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2015
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This is very nice. As a Christian, I too have been changed by His wonderful colors in my life. I wrote a poem about the red of His blood called The Crimson Flow.
Free verse affords you the ability to express yourself without many limitations.
I like the association of colors to items in our experiences. Ex: violet as His robe
Comment Written 10-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2015
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Hello and bless you for such a nice note. I loved what you shared. Thank you!
Comment from JourneyHolm
This was really pretty. I like the tangible qualities you have given to the lightbows. The world is as dark as we see it as, in my opinion. The rainbows are certainly a gift. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2015
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This was really pretty. I like the tangible qualities you have given to the lightbows. The world is as dark as we see it as, in my opinion. The rainbows are certainly a gift. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2015
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Thank you for your words and insight. I really appreciated both!
Comment from lalajovanoski
wow. what an amazing rainbow contest entry poem. this is very moving as well as deep and powerful. you are a very talented poet and look forward to reading more from you. thank you very much for sharing this as i truly enjoyed reading. God bless you
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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2015
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wow. what an amazing rainbow contest entry poem. this is very moving as well as deep and powerful. you are a very talented poet and look forward to reading more from you. thank you very much for sharing this as i truly enjoyed reading. God bless you
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Comment Written 10-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2015
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I think my smile covered my face when I read your comments. Thanks so very much!
Comment from meggie13
Beautiful poem seeing the colors of the rainbow in another light. He has changed the dark colors of your life for more vibrant colors. To Him be the Glory! What beautiful happy poem with such great imagery. The art used is perfect for your write. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2015
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Beautiful poem seeing the colors of the rainbow in another light. He has changed the dark colors of your life for more vibrant colors. To Him be the Glory! What beautiful happy poem with such great imagery. The art used is perfect for your write. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 10-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2015
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What kind words you wrote. You made my day...truly.
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You are very welcome.