Learning to review
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Hi!
I loved this! The touch of humor was just the right dose to back up the validity of your observations. And yes, I agree, some authors could make the nutrition label of a frozen dinner sound exciting. Although I'm sometimes envious of the savvy some authors regularly display, I'm also happy that I have the ability to adequately convey some of my thoughts by means of my writing.
This is an excellent piece of writing that I thoroughly enjoyed. Best of luck with it. I also enjoyed the line in your author notes! Best to you ...
Alan
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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
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Hi!
I loved this! The touch of humor was just the right dose to back up the validity of your observations. And yes, I agree, some authors could make the nutrition label of a frozen dinner sound exciting. Although I'm sometimes envious of the savvy some authors regularly display, I'm also happy that I have the ability to adequately convey some of my thoughts by means of my writing.
This is an excellent piece of writing that I thoroughly enjoyed. Best of luck with it. I also enjoyed the line in your author notes! Best to you ...
Alan
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Comment Written 17-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
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What a lovely thing to say, Alan. I am so pleased you enjoyed it. I will learn...one day!! xsx Sandra
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I did enjoy it! Thanks again for putting it "out there" for us to read!