Comment from CR Delport

Excellent

If I sat in a tree and I see a vision like that, I would probably tumbled to the ground. This is very well written with great descriptions and excellent dialogue. Another well crafted chapter.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014

Hi, CR. Thank you so much for your continued interest and support. It means a lot to me! :) Bev

Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep

Exceptional

This is fantastic writing, Bev. Even though I'm not up with the story I was still engaged and couldn't stop reading. Lots of action and unusual terms which add to the interest, Giddy

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014

Giddy, thank you so much for this grand and generous review. Your perspective means a lot to me. I always try to make the chapters interesting as stand-alones. So, I appreciate your insights.

:) Bev

Comment from JW

Excellent

Hmm. Angelic bloodhound. This is the first time I have ever heard of such. Is it for real?

You did a good job in writing this. Thanks for sharing it. JW

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014

Thank you much, JW. I sure appreciate your ongoing support and encouragement. :) Bev

Comment from Dawn Munro

Exceptional

Ah, Bev, what am I going to do with you? I have almost used all my sixes already, but this simply has to have one...the capper was Wasu. The whole thing is fabulous, but the scene with the ghost of the dog was a stroke of brilliance, in my opinion.

One thing - "Hail Mary, full of grace, the Lord is with thee, blessed art thou among women, and blessed is the fruit of thy womb, Jesus." << I don't know how accurate you want to be with this prayer - it might even have been modernized, but I wanted to give you the option, in case you didn't know it. :)

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014

Thanks, Dawn. I appreciate your thorough and very helpful review. More recently, I've taken to using the blest instead of blessed, and so in a way I'm projecting that unto Father Brian. But I'm very impressed you noticed! Thanks for the grand review, my friend.

Love, Bev

reply by Dawn Munro on 14-Jul-2014

You're very welcome. :)

Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

Good description of events that give me a clear visual of what's going on. Good, clear dialogue between the characters. Smooth transition between events. Nice, steady pace leading to a conclusion that has me looking forward to reading the next chapter. Good work.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014

Hi, RR. Thank you very much for this encouraging and very generous review. Warmest regards, Bev

Comment from boxergirl

Excellent

I love it. Wasu's angelic body returns to rescue Brian. I wonder if he will meet up with the devil dog. That would be quite a confrontation. 8-)

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014

Hiya, BG. Thank you so much for this awesome review. I really appreciate your loyalty to my story! Hugs, Bev

Comment from OLA THOMAS

Excellent

Good delivery of this post, a well programmed storyline with fine details that transfixed a reader as watching a movie. I love this read, not boring'

ola thomas

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 Comment Written 13-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014

Thank you so much, Ola. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter - means a lot to me as does your generous review. :) Bev

Comment from judiverse

Exceptional

This really deserves six stars. You really keep the tension and excitement going. Jake is being very brave in this, especially during his sighting of the Devil Dog. It certainly sounds frightening. When Jake sees the man carrying a body, he thinks that the destination is the Cayuna mine. Father Brian also thinks of the mine. He is such an interesting character because he has to deal with his own demons, and a lot depends on him now. The dog that saves him is spooky. Father Brian thinks at first it is Tony's dog, but it has been killed. Does Father Brian have an angel dog on his side? judi

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014

Judi, thank you so much for this grand and generous review. I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter! You've been so loyal all along and that means a great deal to me. Hugs, Bev

reply by judiverse on 13-Jul-2014

You're welcome. One feels for Father Brian, too, and what he's going through. judi

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

A very creative touch, creating a angelic dog to fight the devil dog. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.

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 Comment Written 13-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014

Thanks so much, Charlie. I appreciate the encouragement and support. :) Bev

reply by c_lucas on 13-Jul-2014

You're welcome, Bev. Charlie

reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014

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Comment from barbara.wilkey

Exceptional

Love your writing and love your story. The plot is excellent and so are the characters. This is another good addition to your novel.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014

Barbara, thank you so much for this gracious and generous review. I really appreciate your encouragement. Hugs, Bev