Comment from in777wr#

Excellent

Very nice poem. We had several ice storms here as well. There were no bus services. LOL. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order. The poem reads well. Nice job.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014

Glad you liked my poem. Thanks for the kind words and the stars.

Comment from rouskin

Excellent

Car frozen solid I must ride the bus to work Jack Frost's such a jerk I enjoyed reading it and wish you all the best in the contest

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014

Glad you liked it. Thanks for the stars and the good wishes.

Comment from HL Pepper

Excellent

Oh, this is good! You've been to my house, haven't you? Although there are no buses that run out this way so I just get a day off, which I enjoy until I get my next check!!

That love/hate relationship with Jack is turning to hate/hate, isn't it!

the only suggestion is on the last line, it's a little tongue-twisty so maybe say "Jack Frost, he's a jerk

Either way, it is really cute!

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014

Thanks for the suggestion and the great review. I think most of the country is ready to murder Jack Frost. LOL

reply by HL Pepper on 01-Mar-2014

I don't think it is ever going to end. It is still snowing where I live and I could deal with that but we are also having 20-30 mph winds and all that does is irritate me and make the dogs not want to go outside to go potty!

Comment from Gypsy Starchild

Excellent

This is very cute little 5-7-5. Your syllable count is right on and it made me smile. You managed to make an experience. That is no fun into a very fun 5-7-5.... good luck in your contest. :)

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014

Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the stars and the good wishes.

Comment from The Boy Whodunnit!

Excellent

I've read quite a few entries listed for this contest, and there are some really good poems. I'd include this one in that group as well. It is well written and has the humour as well.

Good luck.

BW

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014

Thanks for the five. Glad you liked it.

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This really makes clear the current disenchantment with winter. I don't blame everyone - it's been so cold for so long. (70 degrees in Central Texas today, though - I can't complain.) Good luck to you. Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014

Thanks. Yes, it's cold this year. Kind of wish I was in Texas.

Comment from califdot

Excellent

Cute poem! It tells a complete story which is difficult to do with so few words. The poem flows nicely and has a strong cadence when read out loud. Your poem is humorous, which is nice. You have done a good job! I like your poem and can relate.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed my poem.

reply by califdot on 01-Mar-2014

Your welcome!

Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

That's putting it mildly. I think everyone's had enough of Mr. Frost's antics. At least you had clear roads so you could ride a bus, lol. Hugs, Lou

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 Comment Written 01-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014

Yes, everyone's ready for Mr. Frost to move on. Thanks for the stars.

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

Excellent contest entry and a nice subtle humor encased in your short poem. The art work fits your poem to a T. Good luck in the contest. Don and Vicki

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 Comment Written 01-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014

Thanks. I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem.