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Comment from Nosha17
What lovely images of Xmas and beautiful words that you have used. It flowed really well. It has a good message about the true meaning. I enjoyed it very much. The six stars are much deserved. Faye
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What lovely images of Xmas and beautiful words that you have used. It flowed really well. It has a good message about the true meaning. I enjoyed it very much. The six stars are much deserved. Faye
Comment Written 25-Dec-2013
Comment from Sankey
lovely song/ poem mate. Nearly bookcased ya but here we are anyway.
Very nice words and lots of meaning contained within. Wish I had time would write some music for it but you have that already. Need to make some midi files and add them to your song, mate. NO SPAGS! Goodness!
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lovely song/ poem mate. Nearly bookcased ya but here we are anyway.
Very nice words and lots of meaning contained within. Wish I had time would write some music for it but you have that already. Need to make some midi files and add them to your song, mate. NO SPAGS! Goodness!
Comment Written 25-Dec-2013
Comment from Brewster
What a nice Christmas message and you were great at expressing yourself. I hope you have a good Christmas and Happy New Year's too. The picture added to the poem also. Good Job!
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What a nice Christmas message and you were great at expressing yourself. I hope you have a good Christmas and Happy New Year's too. The picture added to the poem also. Good Job!
Comment Written 25-Dec-2013
Comment from ProjectBluebook
Clever AA/BB format, rhymes on time. Mikey, you work on X-mas too, I declare. I like the bold white letters with a black background. Makes her an easy read and looks good. Did Santa give you a sack of stars for X-mas. Lets see-what's in my hacky sack. 'Shiver me to timbers,' what's inside, time to open your big surprise!!! I read the words carefully, saw no errors, now, you ain't got to run in terror. Merry X-mas, Mikey (#13) your one-lean-mean-writing machine. wackydo OOOH Gosh!!! my rump hurts!
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Clever AA/BB format, rhymes on time. Mikey, you work on X-mas too, I declare. I like the bold white letters with a black background. Makes her an easy read and looks good. Did Santa give you a sack of stars for X-mas. Lets see-what's in my hacky sack. 'Shiver me to timbers,' what's inside, time to open your big surprise!!! I read the words carefully, saw no errors, now, you ain't got to run in terror. Merry X-mas, Mikey (#13) your one-lean-mean-writing machine. wackydo OOOH Gosh!!! my rump hurts!
Comment Written 25-Dec-2013
Comment from Erik McGinley
Difficult thoughts?
Nice poem.
I read this one easily and maybe not so quickly. But its a good line.
Just remember, no one hears Santa!
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Difficult thoughts?
Nice poem.
I read this one easily and maybe not so quickly. But its a good line.
Just remember, no one hears Santa!
Comment Written 25-Dec-2013
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Lovely thoughts here, and you didn't leave out the reason for the season. Even those who don't get gifts have the greatest gift of all... endless, perfect love!
Merry Christmas! :)
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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2013
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Lovely thoughts here, and you didn't leave out the reason for the season. Even those who don't get gifts have the greatest gift of all... endless, perfect love!
Merry Christmas! :)
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Comment Written 25-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2013
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Hi! I am so far behind it is insane. But, I wanted to say thank you for all of your help and wish you a wonderful Christmas. Big smiles! mikey
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Thanks... relax and enjoy the day. I don't plan to post a thing today, just relax with family. So, take a well-deserved break! :)
Comment from DALLAS01
I love the way you formatted this with the color, art work and large font. It was like looking through a kaleidoscope into a quieter, less commercial time.
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I love the way you formatted this with the color, art work and large font. It was like looking through a kaleidoscope into a quieter, less commercial time.
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Comment Written 25-Dec-2013