Comment from Siva

Excellent

It is humor throughout. The extra terrestrial must have had the shock of his life dealing with Albert. It made Zarr'ock abort the project that would have benefited mankind. But who cares?

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 Comment Written 25-Jan-2008

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2008

Glad you liked it. Thanks for your review.

Comment from Juana

Exceptional

"Can't park there," said Albert, nodding at the shuttle - great line. Love it.

I come bearing the promise of great gifts for your people. A cure for cancer! Free and clean energy! A diet that allows you to eat chocolate and actually works."

Albert narrowed his eyes. "Are you trying to bribe an officer of the local council?" he asked, his voice low and full of menace. - Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha

This story is BRILLIANT. I adore it... *sigh* I want to read it to my class.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2008

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2008

Haha. Please do. On this one special occassion I will waive my royalties.

I'm glad you like it, especially as you teach English. Thanks for the six