Willing Hearts
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Comment from royowen
I know your main female characters, are feisty, who struggle a little with forgiveness, but are impressed by a man's idealism and honesty, not to mention their robust, but handsome all male appearance, I had to have a chuckle at Noah's reaction, the men are suckers. Heh heh. Well done Barbara, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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I know your main female characters, are feisty, who struggle a little with forgiveness, but are impressed by a man's idealism and honesty, not to mention their robust, but handsome all male appearance, I had to have a chuckle at Noah's reaction, the men are suckers. Heh heh. Well done Barbara, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the catch. I have added that pesky little comma. I appreciate the help and the kind review.
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Most welcome i
Comment from Teri7
This is a really great chapter. I am really getting into this almost like with Emma and Seth. You used great descriptive words and very good dialogue. Great job! love and blessings, teri
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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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This is a really great chapter. I am really getting into this almost like with Emma and Seth. You used great descriptive words and very good dialogue. Great job! love and blessings, teri
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Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from jim vecchio
I'm glad you just posted half. Now, I'll be salivating to read the rest of the chapter. Worthy of more, but all I have is five. Noah's really become a very interesting character. My one small bit of nitpicking: "He was shot is because of me, wasn't he?" I sound like Clinton, "It depends what is is", but, did you mean the word "is" to be there?
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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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I'm glad you just posted half. Now, I'll be salivating to read the rest of the chapter. Worthy of more, but all I have is five. Noah's really become a very interesting character. My one small bit of nitpicking: "He was shot is because of me, wasn't he?" I sound like Clinton, "It depends what is is", but, did you mean the word "is" to be there?
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Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the catch. I have made that silly little correction. I always appreciate the help.
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That's like the puppet criticizing the master!