Willing Hearts
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Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, this cutie pie is going to get herself in trouble pretty soon. Hopefully Noah, will be around to save her... from embracement. Thank you for sharing and I am waiting for the next chapter.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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Wow, this cutie pie is going to get herself in trouble pretty soon. Hopefully Noah, will be around to save her... from embracement. Thank you for sharing and I am waiting for the next chapter.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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Noah had made it his life job to protect Sami, even if he says no. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from estory
There's plenty of tension and plenty of budding romance here, the dialogue is the usual brisk and crisp, but I have to say it's a bit implausible to me that this girl is taking such a huge risk in playing a hooker to get information on this disappeared girl. And the romance cutting in here seems to be jarring against that backdrop. You do have the strong contrasts between the men who do harm and the ones who rescue the damsels in distress. The ones who look out for them. The suspense is there. estory
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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There's plenty of tension and plenty of budding romance here, the dialogue is the usual brisk and crisp, but I have to say it's a bit implausible to me that this girl is taking such a huge risk in playing a hooker to get information on this disappeared girl. And the romance cutting in here seems to be jarring against that backdrop. You do have the strong contrasts between the men who do harm and the ones who rescue the damsels in distress. The ones who look out for them. The suspense is there. estory
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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Sami isn't a normal girl and acts without thinking. It gets her into trouble, as you will find out. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Begin Again
"You may the first guy (be)
Can't believe it...must be a first. Doesn't matter though. Your story is moving along nicely. It's deserving of a 6 but I'm out of them. I have enjoyed these two chapters and look forward to reading more.
Hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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"You may the first guy (be)
Can't believe it...must be a first. Doesn't matter though. Your story is moving along nicely. It's deserving of a 6 but I'm out of them. I have enjoyed these two chapters and look forward to reading more.
Hugs, Carol
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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Don't worry about the six. I appreciate the thought and you reading. HUGS!!
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. I am getting to know Sami. A teacher who goes the extra mile for her kids. Those days in our twenty's when we were going to save the world. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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This is another excellent chapter. I am getting to know Sami. A teacher who goes the extra mile for her kids. Those days in our twenty's when we were going to save the world. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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I appreciate the five-star review but only received three stars. Is this a mistake or do I need to rewrite this post?
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
"No means no"... it would be great if men understood the meaning.
Your new book is exciting. I love a good thriller. ð???
I think the girl in the picture is one of the Kardashian... she is very sexy.
You are the published writer, so obviously you know better but this sounds weird to me.....
"the woman who had [first spoke] turned from her." (Spoken?)
"Another female voice was heard but she didn't turn around. "If we talk to anybody about anything, [there's consequences]."
(There are consequences?)
I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm going to miss Seth and Emma when their story ends.
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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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"No means no"... it would be great if men understood the meaning.
Your new book is exciting. I love a good thriller. ð???
I think the girl in the picture is one of the Kardashian... she is very sexy.
You are the published writer, so obviously you know better but this sounds weird to me.....
"the woman who had [first spoke] turned from her." (Spoken?)
"Another female voice was heard but she didn't turn around. "If we talk to anybody about anything, [there's consequences]."
(There are consequences?)
I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm going to miss Seth and Emma when their story ends.
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Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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I changed the first one because you're 100% right, but I didn't change the second one because, although it's correct English, I doubt these working gals would know that. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
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Yes, I figured it might had been street talk.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi Barbara,
This is another great chapter in this new novel. I really like these characters, and I hope Sami ends up with one of the cops - especially Noah. Thank you for sharing, and I hope the two storylines don't get to be too much because I'm enjoying both of them!
~MP~
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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Hi Barbara,
This is another great chapter in this new novel. I really like these characters, and I hope Sami ends up with one of the cops - especially Noah. Thank you for sharing, and I hope the two storylines don't get to be too much because I'm enjoying both of them!
~MP~
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the wonderful support. Both stories are finished. Just need to edit and review so I can post them.