Willing Hearts
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Comment from eliz100
This is a great first chapter. You have created interesting characters. The storyline is intriguing and I want to keep reading. I do not see any room for improvement. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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This is a great first chapter. You have created interesting characters. The storyline is intriguing and I want to keep reading. I do not see any room for improvement. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the kind review and the support.
Comment from damommy
I'm out of sixes, and this story deserves one. It's a great first chapter, and I want to read more of it, as I'm sure your other readers do. I don't understand the evil of human trafficking. How can one human do that to another is beyond me. It's worldwide, and I don't if it can ever be stopped.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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I'm out of sixes, and this story deserves one. It's a great first chapter, and I want to read more of it, as I'm sure your other readers do. I don't understand the evil of human trafficking. How can one human do that to another is beyond me. It's worldwide, and I don't if it can ever be stopped.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the kind review and the understanding.
Comment from jmdg1954
Heck, Barbara, this is one great start to your next novel. Or is it only a contest entry followed by a few chapters to get a read on its acceptance from the readers?
Because, I'm all in!
Great start!
Cheers,
John
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Heck, Barbara, this is one great start to your next novel. Or is it only a contest entry followed by a few chapters to get a read on its acceptance from the readers?
Because, I'm all in!
Great start!
Cheers,
John
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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It's a novel. I'm hoping to post it every Wednesday until Seth and Emma are finished, and then post it on Sunday's. I'm not sure I can keep up with two a week. This novel is complete and has been for almost a year. Thank you for the support.
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Wow, when do find the time to write all this?
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I'm happiest when I'm writing. So I make the time. I've started another novel and am getting frustrated because I'm struggling finding time to write. LOL
Comment from nomi338
Wow! This is different. This story is somewhat more hard edge than the romantic stories you have previously written. It is different, but I like it very much. It holds a lot of potential promise and excitement mixed in with lots of dangerous drama. I can hardly wait.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Wow! This is different. This story is somewhat more hard edge than the romantic stories you have previously written. It is different, but I like it very much. It holds a lot of potential promise and excitement mixed in with lots of dangerous drama. I can hardly wait.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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It's still a romance. LOL but with a little stronger suspense element. I am hoping I can pull it off. Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Well, keep on posting I like the plot, and I am curious to see what is next. Will she find the girls, will they help her? Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Well, keep on posting I like the plot, and I am curious to see what is next. Will she find the girls, will they help her? Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the review and support.
Comment from Teri7
You did a very good job on this first chapter contest. You wrote about something that is really happening in this day and time. You used great descriptive words and great dialogue. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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You did a very good job on this first chapter contest. You wrote about something that is really happening in this day and time. You used great descriptive words and great dialogue. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the support and encouragement.
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Comment from Begin Again
Well deserving of a six but I'm unable to accommodate you. Your first chapter is filled with tension from start to finish. You'll have every reader sitting on the edge of their seats, praying for Sami's safety as she searches for Myra. Very well done! Good luck in the contest...
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Well deserving of a six but I'm unable to accommodate you. Your first chapter is filled with tension from start to finish. You'll have every reader sitting on the edge of their seats, praying for Sami's safety as she searches for Myra. Very well done! Good luck in the contest...
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the virtual six. I appreciate the support and your review.
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I'm glad I came back in time to catch your story from the beginning. Still wondering about the quiet lawyer and her cowboy... Life got in the way from me finishing it.
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It's with my publisher. It should be published in a few months. Thank you for asking.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Wow, this is not anything I would have ever expected you to write, but you've certainly done it so well. Now, I only wish I had a six so that I could reward it properly. Great chapter! Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Wow, this is not anything I would have ever expected you to write, but you've certainly done it so well. Now, I only wish I had a six so that I could reward it properly. Great chapter! Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the virtual six. It's still a romance, but a little more action and mystery. Not sure I can pull it off, but I'll try. I appreciate the kind review.
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I've read your action-filled stories before, so there's no doubt you'll kill it!
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Kill it means like knock it out of the park. A homerun every time. Thought I'd better clarify myself.
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LOL I understand what you meant. I raised four boys. Their language was a little different than mine, but we understood each other.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a very sad story of human trafficking, especially innocent girls for prostitution and it is absolutely appalling. I know this is a fictional story Barbara, but I also know that this does happen and it is rife in the North of England where the Police seem powerless to stop it. A fine first chapter for the contest, I love the authentic sounding dialogue, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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This is a very sad story of human trafficking, especially innocent girls for prostitution and it is absolutely appalling. I know this is a fictional story Barbara, but I also know that this does happen and it is rife in the North of England where the Police seem powerless to stop it. A fine first chapter for the contest, I love the authentic sounding dialogue, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the kind support. I appreciate it.