The Time I Have Left
Advise for making wise choices45 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
This is a nicely rhymed and wise poem. We all a heartbeat from eternity and being bereft for squandering chancess with missing out on eternity with God is putting it mildly. We need to be wise and make sure we are on the right road.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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This is a nicely rhymed and wise poem. We all a heartbeat from eternity and being bereft for squandering chancess with missing out on eternity with God is putting it mildly. We need to be wise and make sure we are on the right road.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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While is not easy to always do the right thing, The result of trying pays dividends..
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Excellent!
Though I am not a poet, that doesn't prevent me from appreciating rhythm and rhyme. And I love the message. You have captured Christianity.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Excellent!
Though I am not a poet, that doesn't prevent me from appreciating rhythm and rhyme. And I love the message. You have captured Christianity.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Thanks Wayne. Listen Christianity is much more that a title. Many who adopt the title are from being Christ like. They rarely do what Jesus would do. This means they are either confused or just imposters.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing your God given wisdom within this poem. Yes, we are not promised tomorrow or even the rest of today. God sent Jesus to model so many things for us so we know what's expected and one of the main things was to love.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Thank you for sharing your God given wisdom within this poem. Yes, we are not promised tomorrow or even the rest of today. God sent Jesus to model so many things for us so we know what's expected and one of the main things was to love.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Thank you, my dear, dear friend. I am so pleased that you enjoyed my post. Doing the right thing is challenging, especially when we have to deal with the evil influence of Satan the Devil. Yet we must do our best to resist him.
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With God's help we can resist him.
Comment from Jessica Wheeler
This is a beautiful and poignant piece, Nomi. It has a musical quality and reads like song lyrics to me. The concluding line is my favorite, and offers a significant word of advice that others would be wise to follow.
Xo
Jessica
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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This is a beautiful and poignant piece, Nomi. It has a musical quality and reads like song lyrics to me. The concluding line is my favorite, and offers a significant word of advice that others would be wise to follow.
Xo
Jessica
Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much. Your review comments are like music to my eyes and ears.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Your poem resonates with me, as I am quite sure it will with anyone in his or her (shall we say) "Golden Years"... (lol). We get too soon old and too late smart, it's said. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Your poem resonates with me, as I am quite sure it will with anyone in his or her (shall we say) "Golden Years"... (lol). We get too soon old and too late smart, it's said. Nicely done.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much. I love your comments.
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I'm glad you were pleased. You are very welcome.
Comment from Terry Broxson
Nomi, a six for this poem would be a way to say Amen! But I'm out of sixes, so an "Amen" will have to do. We do not know how long we have. I will try to go as long and hard at it as I can and have no regrets when it's over. Well done. Terry.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Nomi, a six for this poem would be a way to say Amen! But I'm out of sixes, so an "Amen" will have to do. We do not know how long we have. I will try to go as long and hard at it as I can and have no regrets when it's over. Well done. Terry.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Thank you Terry. A positive from you is better than a six.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and nice presentation, nomi.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-I like the style with rhyming couplets.
-Effective use of nature imagery to help make your points.
-A good transition from the "lofty trees" and "bountiful seas"
to the evil that some people display.
-You do a good showing how "the Creator was hurt"
and "Jesus advised against hate."
-A very good concluding couplet that I also agree with.
-Well done. Hope you have a great 2024!!!
-I am posting a prose piece for Sun. Hope you stop by.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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-Good artwork and nice presentation, nomi.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-I like the style with rhyming couplets.
-Effective use of nature imagery to help make your points.
-A good transition from the "lofty trees" and "bountiful seas"
to the evil that some people display.
-You do a good showing how "the Creator was hurt"
and "Jesus advised against hate."
-A very good concluding couplet that I also agree with.
-Well done. Hope you have a great 2024!!!
-I am posting a prose piece for Sun. Hope you stop by.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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You know I will. I thank you very much for your positive and uplifting comments.
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You are very welcome, and yes, I do know that.
Comment from GWHARGIS
This should be embroidered on a pillow. Some people need to see ot daily. I'm not sure what makes some people chose wrong over right. I try daily and fail daily to be the person I know He wants me to be. But I do try. Some days are better than others. This was an excellent and inspirational poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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This should be embroidered on a pillow. Some people need to see ot daily. I'm not sure what makes some people chose wrong over right. I try daily and fail daily to be the person I know He wants me to be. But I do try. Some days are better than others. This was an excellent and inspirational poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much Gretchen. The very reason Jesus had to come to th eart is that no one born of Adam and Eve was perfect, and perfection was required. The best that any of us can do is to try.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
We all need to be careful with the time we have left. I agree wholeheartedly. Whether we are old or young the time clock has begun and we face the maker when our time runs out. The clear message is one we all need to heed.
Thanks for the warning.
Jesse
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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We all need to be careful with the time we have left. I agree wholeheartedly. Whether we are old or young the time clock has begun and we face the maker when our time runs out. The clear message is one we all need to heed.
Thanks for the warning.
Jesse
Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Thank you Jesse. A review from you is akin to a golden coin. I appreciate your comments.
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Your kindness is overwhelmingly sweet.
I appreciate you, my friend.
I'll always remember your reply to my review as a special and one-of-a-kind review. Thanks so much!
Jesse
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Comment from rjuselius
This is a brilliant piece of poetry dear nomi! It really epitomizes the creator and mankind.
Bravo my friend!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings with hugs!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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This is a brilliant piece of poetry dear nomi! It really epitomizes the creator and mankind.
Bravo my friend!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings with hugs!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Rebekka. I am thrilled by your fine comments.
