Jealousy
An Acrostic- Loop Poem33 total reviews
Comment from Mia Twysted
I like the way you did this piece. It seems firm and steady and heeds as a warning to those that would have others be jealous of them or even those that are jealous of something. Maybe this could help them curb the feeling.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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I like the way you did this piece. It seems firm and steady and heeds as a warning to those that would have others be jealous of them or even those that are jealous of something. Maybe this could help them curb the feeling.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem mixes the acrostic and the loop poem formats well. It clearly defines the causes and consequences of jealousy
Good luck in the prompt. This should do well.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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This poem mixes the acrostic and the loop poem formats well. It clearly defines the causes and consequences of jealousy
Good luck in the prompt. This should do well.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much
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You are most kindly welcome.
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Comment from DragonSkulls
Wow. Awesome piece of poetry for this contest, author. Finally, someone post something with some thought and skill. Not many who attempt loop poems end the piece with the first word. That's how I think 'every' loop poem should be constructed. Fantastic artwork you have chosen as well. I see win written all over this. I'll keep an eye out when the voting comes around. Hopefully this sixer will put you at the top of the well received page where it belongs. Excellent work. Keep it up. I have nothing I could possibly add to make this any better. Great looper.
DS
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Wow. Awesome piece of poetry for this contest, author. Finally, someone post something with some thought and skill. Not many who attempt loop poems end the piece with the first word. That's how I think 'every' loop poem should be constructed. Fantastic artwork you have chosen as well. I see win written all over this. I'll keep an eye out when the voting comes around. Hopefully this sixer will put you at the top of the well received page where it belongs. Excellent work. Keep it up. I have nothing I could possibly add to make this any better. Great looper.
DS
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much DS, yes when I first tried this form I was told by reviewers that a loop should start and finish this way, your comments and review are so very inspiring and six stars very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from LyndaS
Wow! If I could hand you seven stars for this I would. I think loop poems, though they look simple, are difficult to pull off without them sounding forced. You aced this. Extremely well written and your presentation is very cool. You should win this contest easily. AWESOME POST!!
Lynda
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Wow! If I could hand you seven stars for this I would. I think loop poems, though they look simple, are difficult to pull off without them sounding forced. You aced this. Extremely well written and your presentation is very cool. You should win this contest easily. AWESOME POST!!
Lynda
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Wow! back at you, what an inspirational review, your comments about not being forced is music to my pen, your encouragement and six stars are very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jacob David Collins
I loved the use of the colour green in this piece which worked well with the topic of jealousy. I think we all have feelings of jealousy at some point in our lives, I think it's just something that's part of human nature. A well written piece, I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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I loved the use of the colour green in this piece which worked well with the topic of jealousy. I think we all have feelings of jealousy at some point in our lives, I think it's just something that's part of human nature. A well written piece, I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Acrostic loop poem about jealousy that cannot be controlled by the one who are nurturing the jealousy within their heart for many years and suddenly burst out in a jealousy rage.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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A very well-written Acrostic loop poem about jealousy that cannot be controlled by the one who are nurturing the jealousy within their heart for many years and suddenly burst out in a jealousy rage.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
You have done great with this writing prompt.
Well presented and cleverly crafted, I enjoyed your acrostic-loop poem.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Hello :)
You have done great with this writing prompt.
Well presented and cleverly crafted, I enjoyed your acrostic-loop poem.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from jenintorre
Wow. This is a wonderful peice of of poetry. Acrostic, lune, you name it and also a great entry for the subject of the competition. I love the artwork and presentation. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Wow. This is a wonderful peice of of poetry. Acrostic, lune, you name it and also a great entry for the subject of the competition. I love the artwork and presentation. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Thank you so very much Jen, your encouraging comments and six stars are truly appreciated, I seemed to like this form****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Jealousy can be devious and cunning and strip away all love and consideration as it bears its teeth, a fine acrostic here, much enjoyed, I felt the jealousy, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Jealousy can be devious and cunning and strip away all love and consideration as it bears its teeth, a fine acrostic here, much enjoyed, I felt the jealousy, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from RShipp
Oh, these types of poems are so difficult to do!
Each line was completely centered on its neighbor. Well done!
Best of luck in the One Word: Jealousy writing prompt contest.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Oh, these types of poems are so difficult to do!
Each line was completely centered on its neighbor. Well done!
Best of luck in the One Word: Jealousy writing prompt contest.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much