Hardship
An Acrostic- Loop Poem55 total reviews
Comment from January L'Angelle
I really like this loop acrostic style of poem. I don't think that I've seen anyone ever do this before. I am new at this form of poetry but I enjoy it. I think your sentiments on hardship are spot on. Well done my friend. God bless. -January L. :)
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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I really like this loop acrostic style of poem. I don't think that I've seen anyone ever do this before. I am new at this form of poetry but I enjoy it. I think your sentiments on hardship are spot on. Well done my friend. God bless. -January L. :)
Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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Thank you, yes I think when trying to combine different forms the real challenge is to still make it make sense, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with this interesting form. Your words flow smoothly with great meaning. Your repeated words, as per the loop requirements, fit in nicely to carry the message along. You give readers much to think about.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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You did a great job with this interesting form. Your words flow smoothly with great meaning. Your repeated words, as per the loop requirements, fit in nicely to carry the message along. You give readers much to think about.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your excellent and encouraging review, yes for some reason I like this challenge, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Urial
Hi Kahpot,
Real blues poem here. The art and the words and the theme and the line style. It speaks of the hopes and the fight through the lost scenes of life. What challenges we face are God's call.
Very well done about feelings,
Peace be with you,
Urial
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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Hi Kahpot,
Real blues poem here. The art and the words and the theme and the line style. It speaks of the hopes and the fight through the lost scenes of life. What challenges we face are God's call.
Very well done about feelings,
Peace be with you,
Urial
Comment Written 22-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful comments Urial, your thoughts and exceptional rating are very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
Wow, both an acrostic and a loop poem? Nicely done. I think this one is very imaginative. I appreciate you sharing this poem with us. You must be very creative.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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Wow, both an acrostic and a loop poem? Nicely done. I think this one is very imaginative. I appreciate you sharing this poem with us. You must be very creative.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from estory
As the words get repeated from the end of one line to the beginning of the next, there's this sense of a life dripping down like raindrops running down a windowpane. We feel hope fading away, little by little, the strength to carry on waning away. A great portrait of hardship and how it wears you away. estory
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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As the words get repeated from the end of one line to the beginning of the next, there's this sense of a life dripping down like raindrops running down a windowpane. We feel hope fading away, little by little, the strength to carry on waning away. A great portrait of hardship and how it wears you away. estory
Comment Written 22-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your excellent and encouraging review, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Janetsue
This is a very well-written Acrostic-Loop Poem, kahpot. It relates the message that you must have personally moved forward through some challenging situations. Everyone needs encouragement when hardships are being experienced. Thank you for sharing this excellent posting!
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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This is a very well-written Acrostic-Loop Poem, kahpot. It relates the message that you must have personally moved forward through some challenging situations. Everyone needs encouragement when hardships are being experienced. Thank you for sharing this excellent posting!
Comment Written 22-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful and encouraging comments and review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Mastery
Excellent writing, my friend. Good to see you back to the task of writing. I sincerely did miss you.
Ironic how these lines pertain so well to today's crisis in the world:
"Deflated from life that's inhaled by shadows
Shadows that darken one's clarity of hope...."
Bless you my friend. good job. Bob
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Excellent writing, my friend. Good to see you back to the task of writing. I sincerely did miss you.
Ironic how these lines pertain so well to today's crisis in the world:
"Deflated from life that's inhaled by shadows
Shadows that darken one's clarity of hope...."
Bless you my friend. good job. Bob
Comment Written 22-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Thank you Bob, I have been awol a bit sort of in and out, but have tried to read and keep up, sorry if I have missed so much, your comments are very much appreciated****kahpot
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Quite alright, my friend. I trust all is well? : ) Bob
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is very well written and full of wisdom. How wonderful to find this among all the others around you. Not only are the words profound, but well chosen. This appears hard to do, a loop/acrostic poem, yet also all at once comes across as though effortless. It shows a thoughtful poet, where hard earned choices have come to be a way of life. Expressed with a clarity of vision from someone who has been there and back again. I like the last phrase and thought the best. "Positives that fell to challenges of Hardship." I especially like how you write the word "challenges," showing the idea that a hardship can be overcome and viewed as a challenge, rather than fate to be accepted. We all have and will continue to have, challenges to face that may lead to temporary or continual hardship. This deserves 'poem of the month' status. Thank you for this eye opening survey of how hardships deal blows to the best and worst of us, both.
Take care,
Jesse
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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This is very well written and full of wisdom. How wonderful to find this among all the others around you. Not only are the words profound, but well chosen. This appears hard to do, a loop/acrostic poem, yet also all at once comes across as though effortless. It shows a thoughtful poet, where hard earned choices have come to be a way of life. Expressed with a clarity of vision from someone who has been there and back again. I like the last phrase and thought the best. "Positives that fell to challenges of Hardship." I especially like how you write the word "challenges," showing the idea that a hardship can be overcome and viewed as a challenge, rather than fate to be accepted. We all have and will continue to have, challenges to face that may lead to temporary or continual hardship. This deserves 'poem of the month' status. Thank you for this eye opening survey of how hardships deal blows to the best and worst of us, both.
Take care,
Jesse
Comment Written 22-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Thank you Jesse for this exceptional review, your comments about this poem are very encouraging as you describe it, yes I think we have all had a share of hard times and we must accept them as challenges, this review is very much appreciated****kahpot
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You are wise and thoughtful, and I appreciate your reply. I am glad my review was encouraging. The exceptional rating was well deserved.
Take care,
Jesse
Comment from Boogienights
This is great, combining these two forms of poetry and having it make sense. Another challenge I'll have to try. I enjoyed this very much, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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This is great, combining these two forms of poetry and having it make sense. Another challenge I'll have to try. I enjoyed this very much, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your excellent comments and review, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from TPAC
A very creative read the recycling of words definitely depositing delighting aspects of interests for the reader. I found this write strongly stated in well structured lining making a wonderful read. All stated in my opinion.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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A very creative read the recycling of words definitely depositing delighting aspects of interests for the reader. I found this write strongly stated in well structured lining making a wonderful read. All stated in my opinion.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful and encouraging review, very much appreciated****kahpot