A Fly on the Wall
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "On Not Understanding"A journal musings and assessments about situations
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Comment from Cybertron1986
Your piece struck a relative feel that many readers and peers can quickly relate to. I enjoyed your voice here. It's direct and magnetic in that it broadcasts a genuine concern and passion to the circumstance of life. Well done
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Your piece struck a relative feel that many readers and peers can quickly relate to. I enjoyed your voice here. It's direct and magnetic in that it broadcasts a genuine concern and passion to the circumstance of life. Well done
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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THANK YOU!!! I was reticent to post this, imagining I would receive lots of flack. But it's just my opinion, so I decided I'd go for it. I REALLY appreciate your validating review! xo
Comment from Beri Bee
Great job! It can be sooo hard to adjust to the new world order when you haven't been in the swing for a while! You show that this is the way its always been and will always be for many who grow older... the only thing certain is change. In the end, most folks need their coffee, and cookies are almost always nice!
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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Great job! It can be sooo hard to adjust to the new world order when you haven't been in the swing for a while! You show that this is the way its always been and will always be for many who grow older... the only thing certain is change. In the end, most folks need their coffee, and cookies are almost always nice!
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Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Thanks, Beri! I appreciate this feedback and the fun review. xo
Comment from Tina Crute
Your simple title doesn't give a clue as to the story, which is very creative. You turn ordinary things like aging, wisdom , and society's wonderment, into something very intetesting. You are writing reminds me of the show Seinfeld because it takes ordinary things and makes them so interesting!
Enjoyed it, and I don't get it either:)
Blessings,
Tina
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Your simple title doesn't give a clue as to the story, which is very creative. You turn ordinary things like aging, wisdom , and society's wonderment, into something very intetesting. You are writing reminds me of the show Seinfeld because it takes ordinary things and makes them so interesting!
Enjoyed it, and I don't get it either:)
Blessings,
Tina
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Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Hahaha!
Thank you for this validating review, Tina!! I have a feeling I could be getting some flack for this one, but I decided I'd have my say anyway!! xo
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I think its ok to say
we don't get it....it's
what many people think
so I'm glad you wrote it!
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I'm taking one for the team, Tina!! hahaha
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That's a good teammate!
I've got a poem about
spoiled kids...I will take
a hit soon, lol!
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Not from me, you won't!!
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Haha! Well at
least I will get
1 review, lol!
Thanks:)
Night, have
a good day tomorrow!
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You, too, Tina.