This Time - That Time 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "Amelia Has Some Questions"Third book in the time travel trilogy
29 total reviews
Comment from royowen
What a lovely thing, to be able to confront a thief with evidence of what he's actually stolen...the life of another.
Quite a complex episode Sandra, a lot of effort has gone into this particular episode my friend. Where to frame, Charles is a slimy turdlet, and what's more dangerous, but the letter to her friend should way lay that obstacle. Well done, excellent work my friend, blessjngs, Roy
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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What a lovely thing, to be able to confront a thief with evidence of what he's actually stolen...the life of another.
Quite a complex episode Sandra, a lot of effort has gone into this particular episode my friend. Where to frame, Charles is a slimy turdlet, and what's more dangerous, but the letter to her friend should way lay that obstacle. Well done, excellent work my friend, blessjngs, Roy
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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What a nice review, Roy. Charles really is unstable, and dangerous. The time has come to stop him changing where the sea battle takes place. Some fun for Gladys ahead, but not so for Charles. Thanks again, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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Well thought out and inspired.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Sandra, Oh, I can't wait to see what is happening now. I'm still not
quite sure how this is playing out, but that's the fun of it all.
Just found two minor things where you change from past tense to present tense:
Amelia glanced down, and then with what is an instinctive reaction, = Amelia glanced down, and then with what was an instinctive reaction,
even though she is a good Christian woman. = even though she was a good Christian woman.
I love the story as you know. A big hug. Ullaxxx
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Hi Sandra, Oh, I can't wait to see what is happening now. I'm still not
quite sure how this is playing out, but that's the fun of it all.
Just found two minor things where you change from past tense to present tense:
Amelia glanced down, and then with what is an instinctive reaction, = Amelia glanced down, and then with what was an instinctive reaction,
even though she is a good Christian woman. = even though she was a good Christian woman.
I love the story as you know. A big hug. Ullaxxx
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Thank you so very much for the shiny six stars, Ulla! And a humongous hug for finding those two errors, I'll go and fix them now. Your review is lovely, my friend, you'll soon see how it plays out, not many more parts to go, but a lot still to come. Big hugs, dear friend :)) Sandra xx
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Oh, I hope so. I will so miss the story. It's almost like it's become part of my life. I look out for a new chapter all the time. xxx
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What a lovely thing to say, Ulla. Thank you! I am going to leave the epilogue open as I have an idea running around my head with Veronica's daughter, Ann. Seeing she had psychic abilities in the last book. We'll see. They've been a part of my life for a long time now. :))
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I remember that now, that Ann has inherited the ability. It sounds like a lovely idea. Yeah, I like that. :)))
Comment from JDRBAR
This just keeps getting better and better. I can just imagine Charles trying to prove Amelia is senile due to her age so no one will believe her. She's a plucky woman.
I finished the first book and sure wish I'd read it before reading your stories on fan story. EVERYthing makes sense now that confused be before. Do we ever get to know who the "powers that be" are? Aside from their names, I mean.
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This just keeps getting better and better. I can just imagine Charles trying to prove Amelia is senile due to her age so no one will believe her. She's a plucky woman.
I finished the first book and sure wish I'd read it before reading your stories on fan story. EVERYthing makes sense now that confused be before. Do we ever get to know who the "powers that be" are? Aside from their names, I mean.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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I'm so glad you enjoyed the first book, Diane, if you have a spare moment, would you put a review on Amazon for me? Do you get to know who the PTB are? In a word, NO. I might want to use them again with Veronica's daughter, Ann, who can talk to ghosts. I'm not sure yet but the idea is simmering.
Thank you so much for the 6 stars, my friend, and for the lovely review. I really appreciate you and what you have to say. Big hugs! :)) Sandra xx
I'll be around at about 3pm tomorrow. It's 6pm here now, will that be alright for you?
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Three your time...10 a.m. my time. Great for me.
I'll gladly write a review for you.
Comment from Treischel
Mildred's chewed lip is a clever and revealing touch, to show her concern.
I smiled at, "Get cracking."
The discussion about ghosts and dying was compelling. The extra police note is another good idea. I'm glad Amelia is so into it.
And it starts. Of course you leave us hanging, like any good writer would.
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Mildred's chewed lip is a clever and revealing touch, to show her concern.
I smiled at, "Get cracking."
The discussion about ghosts and dying was compelling. The extra police note is another good idea. I'm glad Amelia is so into it.
And it starts. Of course you leave us hanging, like any good writer would.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Bless your heart, you read both parts straight off! Thank you so much, Tom, for another really lovely review. Yes, Amelia is a good Christian lady and believes in doing the right thing. The next part is going to upset Charles a bit! Thank you, my friend. Big hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Sandra,
This is moving along very well indeed. I really like Amelia. Tough and proper. lol
You's a good woman. Can't say that for your nephew, though.- I'd like to think not, unless he was some asexual being, post-op transexual, or hermaphrodites... lol
look of astonishment as she watched then pen appear - watched the pen.
Amelia stood ram-rod straight - ramrod can be a single word.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Hi Sandra,
This is moving along very well indeed. I really like Amelia. Tough and proper. lol
You's a good woman. Can't say that for your nephew, though.- I'd like to think not, unless he was some asexual being, post-op transexual, or hermaphrodites... lol
look of astonishment as she watched then pen appear - watched the pen.
Amelia stood ram-rod straight - ramrod can be a single word.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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LOL!! I'll have to sort that! You're just like Amelia, find something that I didn't think of! Post-op transexual! LOL. I'm glad you like her. :))
Thanks for this lovely review, Gareth, I'll fix those other errors now. Big hugs, my friend, and thank you! :)) Sandra xx
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Well... she laid it all right out there, didn't she. "What do you have to say for yourself?" I'm sure he will fly into a rage. That is his personality. Of course he will deny it
at first. Then when she shows him the proof ,what? We will see. Hurry up this is the good part. LOL Well done Sandra. Nancy:)
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Well... she laid it all right out there, didn't she. "What do you have to say for yourself?" I'm sure he will fly into a rage. That is his personality. Of course he will deny it
at first. Then when she shows him the proof ,what? We will see. Hurry up this is the good part. LOL Well done Sandra. Nancy:)
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
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The next part is going to be fun. lol. Thank you so much, Nancy, for another lovely review, and for all your support. I'm hurrying, honest! :)) Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Mistydawn
Why did you stop there? I was so looking forward to hear what that jerk had to say, how he'd react to the news. I do hope he don't hurt his aunt, that her backup can stop him if he tries. It's very well-written, interesting start to finish, and that's one heck of a hook. Great job as always.
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Why did you stop there? I was so looking forward to hear what that jerk had to say, how he'd react to the news. I do hope he don't hurt his aunt, that her backup can stop him if he tries. It's very well-written, interesting start to finish, and that's one heck of a hook. Great job as always.
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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I'm so sorry, my friend. I thought it was too long and was going to cut it a bit. I am so pleased you enjoyed it and it wasn't too long for you. I'm writing the next part now, it's going to be fun!! Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx
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You could write 3000 words and I'd be so in to it that I wouldn't notice. The way you did it made a great hook. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. I'm sure it'll be well worth the wait. Take care.
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Bless your heart. 3000 words, hmm!! :)) xx
Comment from Commando
A "SALUTE," Sandra!
My grandpa told me, "Billy, when you're all growed up, be a man of few words. However, make the few words heard." Are you listening? Your presentation is "AWESOME!" It's crystal clear why you are the #2 Novelist on FanStory--"Toot, Toot!" Thanks for sharing, best wishes and God Bless.
Respectfully, with Admiration,
Bill
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A "SALUTE," Sandra!
My grandpa told me, "Billy, when you're all growed up, be a man of few words. However, make the few words heard." Are you listening? Your presentation is "AWESOME!" It's crystal clear why you are the #2 Novelist on FanStory--"Toot, Toot!" Thanks for sharing, best wishes and God Bless.
Respectfully, with Admiration,
Bill
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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My goodness! Thank you so very much, Bill, for the wonderful 6 stars and fabulous review. I really appreciate your lovely thoughts. Thank you!! Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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Oh, no! Big hugs? Shee! Your husband's gonna be jealous. :)) Best wishes for an awesome week. Bill xx
Comment from damommy
I should be used to these sudden stops just when it's getting exciting, but I'm NOT. I can't wait to see what Charles does next. I hope Amelia tells him right away that she has a letter stored in a safe place. Hurry with the next chapter!!!!!!!
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I should be used to these sudden stops just when it's getting exciting, but I'm NOT. I can't wait to see what Charles does next. I hope Amelia tells him right away that she has a letter stored in a safe place. Hurry with the next chapter!!!!!!!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Aw, Yvonne, thank you so much for the 6 stars, I was worried it was too long. I'm working on the next part now. It won't be long. Poor Charles won't know what hit him! Thank you for this really lovely review, my friend. Big hugs. Sandra xxx
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It wasn't too long. Never!