Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

I think that is a good idea. Make him believe he has been found out and it will only be a mater of time before he is incarcerated. He will know better than to hurt Amelia for fear that would really be his undoing. I am anxious to read about the haunting or spooking or whatever you want o call it. LOL Good job Sandra. Nancy:)

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019

Veronica can't wait, either! LOL. She'll really enjoy that part. Thank you so very much for another lovely review, Nancy. You've been supportive all the way through and I do appreciate you. Big hugs, my dear friend. :)) Sandra xx

Comment from damommy

Exceptional

This is a great plan. I'm sure Mildred will be able persuade Amelia.

Interesting that Veronica didn't get wet.

I've been worried about the romance between Tommy and Mildred. I just hope Mildred doesn't stay behind with him.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019

Thank you so very much for the six stars, Yvonne. The blossoming romance between Mildred and Tommy has given me a lot of mixed reaction from reviewers over the last few chapters. lol, we'll have to wait and see what happens. Thanks for another lovely review, my friend. Big hugs Sandra xxx

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Exceptional

Super good episode today. Bravo! I'm interested in how they will portray Gladys as a ghost to be convincinng. THere are a lot of tricks the people must know from those days. And how will that stop the enemy from winnng the war? You need to write more often, because I'm old and forgetful. :)

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019

Thank you so very much, my friend, for the shiny six stars!! I've got the next part ready to go, but need to let this one run its course. You'll soon see how they stop him. I'm going to have a bit of fun with him first! Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

I hadn't read your story before, but it's very well written. I particularly enjoyed the part set in 1915.
Thanks so much for sharing. I hope to read more chapters in the future.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019

Thank you so much, Maria, for popping in to read this part. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. :) Sandra xx

Comment from Ulla

Exceptional

Hi Sandra, I love it. I absolutely love it. Those three are scheming a scream. I'm so looking forward to see the b.....d have it coming to him. It's so well written. A big hug. Ulla xxxx

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019

Thank you so much for the lovely six stars and lovely review, Ulla! I loved that.... scheming a scream! lol, that was brilliant. Thanks, my friend. Big hugs. Sandra xxx

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi Sandra,

Well, now Amelia may well be getting in on the act too, whilst the PTB sit back & enjoy themselves. lol

"Did you?" he asked as he threw the question to the other three and looked at each of their faces - you could omit the actual tag her. 'he asked' is redundant given there's a previous tag. You could just start as he threw the question...

Ah, Mildred the agent of Time.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019

Thank you for this, Gareth, I'll take that out. And thanks for another lovely review, my friend. Big hugs. Sandra xxx

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

And the scheming continues. I do hope all their plans, hard work works. It's very well-written, interesting, your characters, dialogue, thoughts and actions seem real. Great job as always.
How's you're eye? Hopefully it's healed.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019

Thank you so much for another of your thoughtful and supportive reviews, my friend. I really appreciate them. Big hugs. Sandra xx

Comment from alexisleech

Exceptional

Another great chapter, Sandra. As I keep saying, you manage to transport the reader to the room - the sign of an excellent writer. So, the'Powers' have cottoned on to the fact Mildred and Tommy are becoming an item? How they're going to handle it will be interesting!

Alexis xxx
P.S. I hope those goblets were made of metal!

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019

Pure Gold goblets with diamond and emerald encrustations for the Powers-that-be! What else!!! lol. Thank you so very much for the 6 stars, my friend, and wonderful review. The Powers have some thinking to do regarding Mildred. It will be interesting what happens, I'm sure. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi Sandra,

Wow, this wS a long chapter, but a great read, my friend. I loked the last section best, as it seems to be carrying the action forward. Very well written with nothing for me to suggest revising.

Thanks for sharing.

Jan :-)

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019

Thank you for your lovely review, Jan. I really appreciate it. :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from JudyE

Excellent

I'm enjoying your story. The dialogue moves it along nicely and is realistic. I couldn't find any spags, however hard I looked. lol Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 07-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019

Thank you so much, Judy, for this really nice review. Big hugs. :) Sandra xx