Comment from Sasha

Excellent

I have always been fond of the Rondeau but love the The Rondeau Redouble. I am not sure if I fully understand the rhyme scheme but still feel you did a terrific job with this. Marvelous repeating lines and on a subject I definitely can relate to. Wonderful entry for this contest and I sincerely wish you all the best.

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 Comment Written 21-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019

Thanks, Sasha.

It seems many people on FS can relate to this!

Steve

Comment from Miss Sherry

Excellent

Join the line, it starts right after me, LOL. Very clever and well-written. But a man of your fame can hire someone to climb those stairs. At least it creeps up on us slowly - Can someone please point me to the oxygen masks?

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 Comment Written 21-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019

Thanks, Sherry.

Can't do anything about it, so might as well enjoy it and have a laugh!

Steve