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Comment from Raul1
Kind of interesting. It has no action. All this person does is eat his can of food. I kind of like it. You should have done better than this. It is okay.
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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Kind of interesting. It has no action. All this person does is eat his can of food. I kind of like it. You should have done better than this. It is okay.
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Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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How's this:
Steve ripped open the bag of moist dog food. Dropping it on the floor, he called the dog over. Chipper ate half of the meal. At that point, Steve grabbed the tiny Yorkshire and bit into its throat. He let the spurting blood run down his face as he laughed.