This Time - That Time 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "James Discovers More Bad News"Third book in the time travel trilogy
34 total reviews
Comment from aryr
This was great Sandra. Wow, yes you were indeed famous way back in 1886 and even on our side of the ocean, fantastic. Perhaps it was Mildred who managed to evacuate the hospital. It must be devastating and frustrating for Veronica not to be able to get back, but at least she has zeroed in to the fact that her past experiences were because she needed to solve something. Very enjoyable reading, thanks for sharing. Hugs and smiles.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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This was great Sandra. Wow, yes you were indeed famous way back in 1886 and even on our side of the ocean, fantastic. Perhaps it was Mildred who managed to evacuate the hospital. It must be devastating and frustrating for Veronica not to be able to get back, but at least she has zeroed in to the fact that her past experiences were because she needed to solve something. Very enjoyable reading, thanks for sharing. Hugs and smiles.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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That was so funny, Alie, I couldn't have written that for a script in a million years. Imagine looking for something that happened nearly 200 years ago and the person that started it had the same name as you! So weird. Thanks for reading this part, and now she has sussed out a bit, more will follow in the next part. Big hugs my friend. :) Sandra xx
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You are so welcome Sandra, It was amazing at the information you provided. Hugs and smiles.
Comment from alexisleech
Don't James and Veronica make the perfect couple? They're loving, supportive, and are always there for each other, no matter what the problem - if only all marriages could be so perfect. Veronica will work it out - especially when she has you to help her!
Alexis xxx
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Don't James and Veronica make the perfect couple? They're loving, supportive, and are always there for each other, no matter what the problem - if only all marriages could be so perfect. Veronica will work it out - especially when she has you to help her!
Alexis xxx
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Aww, thank you so much for the lovely six stars, Alexis, and the wonderful review. I think there should be a potion that the vicar sprinkles over the couple standing before him before they take their final vows, that will keep them in love and best friends. Wouldn't that be amazing? Do you think we could invent something like that? We'd make millions!! LOL. Thank you dear friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from apky
The chapter is fabulous, and now I too, along with Vero, am all het ip over where Mildred could be. And then V isn't sure where she's been sent to? That's very unsettling. But an altogether marvellous read.
(add ")No ... I seem to remember it was in September, but the exact date ...?"
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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The chapter is fabulous, and now I too, along with Vero, am all het ip over where Mildred could be. And then V isn't sure where she's been sent to? That's very unsettling. But an altogether marvellous read.
(add ")No ... I seem to remember it was in September, but the exact date ...?"
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Goodness knows how I missed that, Aki, thank you so much for mentioning it. I've added them in now, phew!! I'm so pleased you are enjoying this book, you are such a prolific and well known author, (I've been reading more about you on Amazon) for you to enjoy my book is such a compliment. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from WryWriter
This chapter is superb! Super exciting and pacing is right on target. Ending point-perfect! Leaves the reader wanting to turn the page! Much enjoyed!
I'd set this off for reader's ease: powers that be ('powers that be').
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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This chapter is superb! Super exciting and pacing is right on target. Ending point-perfect! Leaves the reader wanting to turn the page! Much enjoyed!
I'd set this off for reader's ease: powers that be ('powers that be').
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Thank you so very much for the lovely 6 stars, WW, that is so kind of you. I've now hyphenated the powers-that-be, because you were the second person who mentioned that. I don't know why I didn't think to do that in the first place. :(
I'm love the 'Super exiting...' LOL, that did put a big smile on my face. Thank you for this terrific review, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from nancy_e_davis
That's pretty funny Sandra. Well that does sound like it was Mildred who organized the evacuation of the hospital. It sounds like something she might do regardless just thinking ahead. Well done. Good job. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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That's pretty funny Sandra. Well that does sound like it was Mildred who organized the evacuation of the hospital. It sounds like something she might do regardless just thinking ahead. Well done. Good job. Nancy:)
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Thank you, Nancy. It's a Mildred thing, isn't it? I think this is Veronica's hardest assignment, and she won't find it gets any easier for a while. It's certainly been my hardest to write!! lol. I'm glad you are still with me, my friend. Big hugs. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from l.raven
Hi Sandra, Ok..this is getting scary....if you don't know why they haven't sent you back.....then who would ?....would you make an appointment with someone....and get back with Mildred....not sure what you could do....but she could use the company...And lay off drinking all those liquids...you'll be up all night ...until one of you cumuicate with to other...your at a stand still...very well written chapter my sweet friend...but we need some answers Mrs. I don't drop any hints...love you thousands....Linda xxoo
Hi to Ian for my....he is still in my thoughts....xxoo love
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Hi Sandra, Ok..this is getting scary....if you don't know why they haven't sent you back.....then who would ?....would you make an appointment with someone....and get back with Mildred....not sure what you could do....but she could use the company...And lay off drinking all those liquids...you'll be up all night ...until one of you cumuicate with to other...your at a stand still...very well written chapter my sweet friend...but we need some answers Mrs. I don't drop any hints...love you thousands....Linda xxoo
Hi to Ian for my....he is still in my thoughts....xxoo love
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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LOL!! That's certainly telling me! Are you always this bossy??? LOL I'll book an appointment to meet the 'Powers' they might give me a few biggish clues, I'll tell them you are moaning at me and they might sit up and listen! :)) :)) :))
Thank you my dear (now very bossy) friend, love you more, and sending you loads of hugs too. Share them with Noah, please, he's a cutie. :)) xxxxx
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don't make have to report to Graham...LMBO...your to funny my sweet friend...most of the time I am pretty passive...but those Powers need to wake up...Mildred is all alone out there...and even Lassie can't help her...sooooooo welcome you...and the biggest hugs back at you...and yes I well share them with Noah...smiling soooo big back at you...much love...xxoo...I'm on my way out the door now...oh!!! I forgot something...I have to put my bra on...headshake...I'll never get out of here...LOL...loveeeeeee you...xxoo
Comment from Tootsie55
This was another great chapter. I am really getting into this now. Loved the Het up have not heard that expression for ages. What about Rizzo on MASH "I only wanna "hep!"
Finding the font a bit small.
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Remember my suggestion for the last chapter re...powers(-) that(-) be
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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This was another great chapter. I am really getting into this now. Loved the Het up have not heard that expression for ages. What about Rizzo on MASH "I only wanna "hep!"
Finding the font a bit small.
Possible miss...(")No ... I seem to
Remember my suggestion for the last chapter re...powers(-) that(-) be
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Oh dear, I did miss those speech tags, I've put them in now. I forgot to hyphenate the powers, I've done it now, and I've gone into my Word manuscripts and added them all through. Thank you for reminding me! I've also enlarged the font so it's easier to read. I loved watching MASH, I would laugh until I cried when I watched those shows. Thank you so much for reading and the lovely review, my friend. Big hugs, Sandra xxx
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Yeah I have to spare Louise (Geoff talking) from the MASH series for a while now. She prefers the Sherman Potter (Harry Morgan) end of the series
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Oh my! You have upped your game with this post. I have absolutely no idea how you're going to solve this problem. I always to help solve the problem in my brain. I have no clue this time. I can't wait for more.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Oh my! You have upped your game with this post. I have absolutely no idea how you're going to solve this problem. I always to help solve the problem in my brain. I have no clue this time. I can't wait for more.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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It's all there in the dark recesses of my mind, I've got to start hooking them out! lol. Thank you so much, Barbara, for this lovely review. I'll drop a few more clues soon. I do like to keep my readers happy! lol. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from damommy
Getting het up is a Southern expression here. What in the world is going to happen next? I expected Veronica to be sent back as James was researching. Then I thought she'd have to be before the children came home. The tension is killing me. lol
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Getting het up is a Southern expression here. What in the world is going to happen next? I expected Veronica to be sent back as James was researching. Then I thought she'd have to be before the children came home. The tension is killing me. lol
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Veronica is getting really annoyed. All she wants to do is get back and help Mildred. Oh, I don't want you to die on me before the end of the book, LOL,LOL!! The children never miss her, because they never know their mum has gone. The 'powers' always return her to the same instant that they took her away. Quite handy that when it comes to child minders when you're off to work! :)) Thank you so much, my friend, loved this review. :)) Sandra xx
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That's true. I'd forgotten that she returns the same time she left.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
I have no idea what Veronica is missing, do you? I'm sure you'd tell me if you did, right? All this bouncing back and forth in time is making me hungry. Wait here while I get a snack.
Back now. Had some yummy lemon cookies (biscuits to you). Sandra? Darn it, she didn't wait. Maybe she's busy saving the planet. It's hard having a friend who won't stay put.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
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I have no idea what Veronica is missing, do you? I'm sure you'd tell me if you did, right? All this bouncing back and forth in time is making me hungry. Wait here while I get a snack.
Back now. Had some yummy lemon cookies (biscuits to you). Sandra? Darn it, she didn't wait. Maybe she's busy saving the planet. It's hard having a friend who won't stay put.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
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LOL! You could always post me some, I love yummy lemon biscuits, and chocolate, and ginger nuts and.... Just send them all over, I'm starving now!
Yes, it is tiring saving the planet, lol, I'm going to have to Eric to help me. lol. Thanks my friend. I'm off to bed now. Fingers crossed I won't have a coughing fit tonight. Goodnight dear friend. :) xxxx