Comment from Ulla

Exceptional

Oh, this is really weird, Sandra. What the heck is going on. I'm beginning to feel really scared as if somebody is playing with Veronica's mind. I'm glad I still had a six left for this wonderful writing
or I'd feel James beside me because we were were about to go to bed. = delete one 'were'
Big hugs. Ulla xxx

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

---

reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018

Thank you so very much for the six stars, Ulla. This is very scary for Veronica, too. But, we'll get a lot of answers from Mildred in the next part. Thanks for picking up that extra word, I don't know how I missed it, I read it through a few times and never saw it.
:( Big hugs back. :) Sandra xxx

Comment from K. R. Ward

Excellent

This is a very well written, enjoyable piece of writing. We are trying figure things out along with the MC, which I find preferable to being behind the MC. I think it's quite a risky move to bring one of your characters back to life, because sometimes it takes away the feeling of reality. Good job!

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

---

reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018

Thank you for your lovely review, my friend. Mildred is 'different' she died at the end of the last book and then came back looking a lot younger while Veronica was standing by her graveside. The readers all accepted it because of all the goings on in the two previous books. I know it sounds complicated, but strangely enough it is actually a very easy to take in. Thanks again for the lovely review. :) Sandra xx

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Oh, goodness. What can this mean? It seems the powers that be have messed up, but I know they don't do that. You've left me with a mystery I can't begin to solve. Good job.

-because [we] were about to go to bed.
- pastry, cum{?} everything, board,

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

---

reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018

If Veronica is confused, you are most certainly allowed to be, Yvonne, lol. Thank you so much my friend for your lovely review and for picking up the missing 'we',

The other one, now how can I put this delicately? I wrote that in a chapter in the last book and someone very graphically told me the meaning of 'cum' I was just pleased he couldn't see my face on here. I did look on Google when that happened, and the sentence is correct as I had it, 'pastry cum everything,' but after that, I won't put it on FS!! lol. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

reply by damommy on 19-Nov-2018

I understand. But that person was ignorant of how it should be. lol

reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018

Absolutely. Why do people do that to words? It's like Gay, you can't use that as it's original meaning any more. Sad isn't it? xx

reply by damommy on 19-Nov-2018

I know. If I feel like saying I feel very gay today, I will. We can't let that kind of thing control us. I have a friend named Gay, too.

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Exceptional

What is going on, and why is she in 1996? She knows it now, but does it have some significance? Must be scary ending up in the wrong time/place, with no explanation. I'm scared myself, having no clue where you're headed. And you'll wait a whole week to post again. You are a cruel person, Veronica! :)

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

---

reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018

Yes, she's back in 1996 ... BUT.... Continued until next week!! LOL Thank you so very much for the lovely six stars, my dear friend. The reason for her assignment will hit Veronica soon with a hell of a wallop! If I can I'll put the next part on earlier. It's reviewing and building up the pumps in between. Are you going to post another chapter of 'Pain' soon? I'm always looking out for it having missed one once before. Big hugs, my dear friend. :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from alexisleech

Exceptional

Oh my goodness! Does that mean she never married James and had their two wonderful children? How could that happen? Obviously, the 'powers that be' are trying to tell her something about the past, but I'm sure it will be impossible for her to take on board.
Now you have me on the edge of my seat, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Alexis xxx

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

---

reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018

Actually, Alexis, you are very, very warm, the nearest so far! No one else has sussed it out yet. Some answers will be revealed next time, so watch this space. Thank you so very much for the lovely six stars, my friend!! :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from aryr

Excellent

A great chapter Sandra. Lots of mystery and suspense. What time frame had Veronica returned to? Why? What was the purpose of this warp in time? So many questions, indeed. Lots of memories and flash backs. Was Veronica reliving Mildred's death? Definitely a great chapter. Thanks so much for sharing, hugs and smiles.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

---

reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018

Thank you so much, Ali, for your lovely review. Yes, Veronica is frantic, Something most definitely is not right! Some of the answers will be revealed next time. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

reply by aryr on 19-Nov-2018

You are so welcome, Sandra. I will eagerly await the next chapter. It was great.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

This post have me just as confused as Veronica is. Oh my!! LOL I can't wait for the next one.

After I stood up, I gingerly felt around to find a light switch, and let out a sigh of relief when I found one next to a door frame and flicked it on. (you can omit 'up')

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

---

reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018

The next part will most surely answer Veronica's and your questions, the confusion will be replaced with.... lol. Thank you so much, my friend. Big hugs. :) Sandra xxx

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

I'm trying hard to remember but I just don't remember when Mildred joined Veronica. The exact year seems to be in question and the clues are very puzzling. I found one spag in the notes. [Tommy - Gladys's 30-year-old doctor]
You need to get son in there someplace. LOL I'll let you decide. Well done dear. Nancy:)

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

---

reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018

I'm so sorry this part has left some confused, the nice thing is, the answers are coming in the next part, I'm sure Veronica will pass our again when she learns them from Mildred. :)) Thank you so much, Nancy, for this lovely review. I've added 'Son' to his description, thank for pointing that out. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from apky

Excellent

I'm as puzzled as Vero about her new time-travelling. Like her, my own mind is doing cartwheels as I relive her uncertainty with her.

And yes, Mildred would be a huge help here. Let's hope so anyway.

You threw in some new angles in this story that flesh it out for me further. I'll hold on to my questions until the next chapter where I might find the answers - or not.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

---

reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018

Mildred has the answers, but it will depend on the questions as to whether yours will be answered! LOL. Thank you so much, Aki, for your lovely review. You will learn a lot more in the next chapter. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from Jaye Bennett

Excellent

I am thoroughly enjoying your book. At a guess, I'd say the plot took as long to lay out as the book did to write. Your story line is interesting. I haven't a clue to where you are going, but I do want to take the trip. Nice.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

---

reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018

Thank you so much, Jaye. The plot has taken a while, although soon everyone will see why these mysteries were necessary. Next part will answer many questions and many will be shocked. :)) Big hugs Sandra xx