This Time - That Time 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Oh, Lordy, RUN...."Third book in the time travel trilogy
36 total reviews
Comment from Swampfox1
It is certainly well written, I did not find any errors. I like the time travel thing, the idea of these people being on assignment, etc. It all works well. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
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It is certainly well written, I did not find any errors. I like the time travel thing, the idea of these people being on assignment, etc. It all works well. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much, my friend, for this lovely review. I'm so pleased you are enjoying this story. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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You're welcome
Comment from Kelly Hanna
I have read chapter eight and I find myself invested in the storyline. I love Mildred's accent and Veronica is a great lead character. The banter between the powers that be was a very good opener for the chapter. I hope to see Chapter 10 soon! I am excited to find out where they've landed this time. And what will happen with Gladys. A great chapter for your book! No errors that I could find either. Good job!
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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I have read chapter eight and I find myself invested in the storyline. I love Mildred's accent and Veronica is a great lead character. The banter between the powers that be was a very good opener for the chapter. I hope to see Chapter 10 soon! I am excited to find out where they've landed this time. And what will happen with Gladys. A great chapter for your book! No errors that I could find either. Good job!
Comment Written 24-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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Hi Kelly, thank you so much for this lovely review. I'm so pleased to have you on board. All answers will come in the next few chapters, and then Veronica and Mildred have to make sure the time line is put right. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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Well I'll be on the lookout for the next chapter! Thanks for sharing!
Comment from nancy_e_davis
What is it? WWI? I don't know what else unless it is an earthquake which I doubt. I would say flying glass fragments would indicate a bomb. They are in extreme danger that is obvious. Don't keep us waiting too long Sandra.
Well Done. :)Nancy
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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What is it? WWI? I don't know what else unless it is an earthquake which I doubt. I would say flying glass fragments would indicate a bomb. They are in extreme danger that is obvious. Don't keep us waiting too long Sandra.
Well Done. :)Nancy
Comment Written 24-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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No, not an earthquake in England, I doubt that has ever happened here, perhaps a jelly wobble one! lol. WW1? Check in next time, my friend. I'm halfway through the next part, so you might get it a bit earlier this time. Thank you so much, my friend, for this lovely review. big hugs, Sandra xsx
Comment from aryr
It was good to see the 'powers that be' active again, Sandra. They provided some information, but only some, not the whole. James found the ladies story amazing, especially the name that Mildred used. It was a great touch to add in the success of Michael and Ann at school. All of these not only provided much needed information but was also entertaining to read. Of course, you did leave the end of the chapter with a tremendous amount of suspense and mystery. Very well done, thanks for sharing, my friend. Hugs and Smiles.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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It was good to see the 'powers that be' active again, Sandra. They provided some information, but only some, not the whole. James found the ladies story amazing, especially the name that Mildred used. It was a great touch to add in the success of Michael and Ann at school. All of these not only provided much needed information but was also entertaining to read. Of course, you did leave the end of the chapter with a tremendous amount of suspense and mystery. Very well done, thanks for sharing, my friend. Hugs and Smiles.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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Thank you, Alie, for this lovely review. I'm glad you liked the mix in this part, it just shows that Veronica has a normal life as well. The ending really shook the two women up, They will soon discover why they have been sent to the past this time.Big hugs back, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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You are so welcome Sandra, it was rather enjoyable and mysterious. Hugs and smiles Alie
Comment from JDRBAR
OH LORDY, MISS SANDRA!!!!! You can't leave me dangling here. LOL Excellent chapter in the way you went from the calm, serene environment to chaos. Loved it!
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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OH LORDY, MISS SANDRA!!!!! You can't leave me dangling here. LOL Excellent chapter in the way you went from the calm, serene environment to chaos. Loved it!
Comment Written 24-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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LOL!! I can, you know! lol. Everything will become clear in the next part. Hopefully, they will soon find out what the 'powers' want them to put right. Thank you so much, for the 6 stars, my friend, and this fun review. I'm so pleased you liked it. Big hugs, :) Sandra xx
Comment from tfawcus
Great touches of humour in this one. I also like the way you introduce further detail about Holloway with the comparison you make here: "Drinking tea out of those tin beakers probably made it taste worse than it actually was." - so natural when it comes up in conversation like this.
I wonder if this sentence might sound better if it was split. It's a bit of a mouthful as it is:
"That evening, after we'd had an early dinner due to James's hospital shift finishing at four o'clock, we sat down and listened to the children tell us about their day at school."
You certainly hit us with a sudden change of scene at the end, but I imagine all will become clear in the next chapter! A good cliffhanger!
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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Great touches of humour in this one. I also like the way you introduce further detail about Holloway with the comparison you make here: "Drinking tea out of those tin beakers probably made it taste worse than it actually was." - so natural when it comes up in conversation like this.
I wonder if this sentence might sound better if it was split. It's a bit of a mouthful as it is:
"That evening, after we'd had an early dinner due to James's hospital shift finishing at four o'clock, we sat down and listened to the children tell us about their day at school."
You certainly hit us with a sudden change of scene at the end, but I imagine all will become clear in the next chapter! A good cliffhanger!
Comment Written 24-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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Thank you, Tony, for another of your lovely, helpful reviews. I'll certainly look at that sentence. I think I really need to make a change in the wording to make it flow right, so I'll spend a bit of time on that. The ending has everyone thinking the wrong thing, lol, so pleased about that!! Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
What? What happened? Damn you, girl, I demand you tell me right now what the heck happened!!! Grrrr... That's really mean. Where did you learn such a thing? Keeping the reader waiting and waiting. You don't post often, so it's even worse! I refuse to give this the six it deserves. So there!
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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What? What happened? Damn you, girl, I demand you tell me right now what the heck happened!!! Grrrr... That's really mean. Where did you learn such a thing? Keeping the reader waiting and waiting. You don't post often, so it's even worse! I refuse to give this the six it deserves. So there!
Comment Written 23-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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I have to say, I had a most amazing teacher for writing cliff-hangers!! LOL :))) Did you do a whoopsie and give me 6 by mistake? LOL, LOL! Thank you so much, my friend, it's wonderful to see you on here today. And posting! Brilliant. Thank you for the lovely 6, even more precious now you've told me you wouldn't give me one, lol. Big hugs! :)) Sandra xxxx
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Can't help giving you a six. The darn story is really good. But you can't just leave me hanging like that. I would never do that to you! :)
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HUH? Umm, is this the Phyllis Stewart who ALWAYS, ALWAYS kept me hanging with her Luke stories, and so many others??? Hmm, LOL!!! :))
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No, this is a totally different person.
Sitting less is helping, in just a few days!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
An earthquake, but where are we? I am confused, but I think I'm supposed to be confused, right? This is another good write. I do enjoy this story. Thank you.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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An earthquake, but where are we? I am confused, but I think I'm supposed to be confused, right? This is another good write. I do enjoy this story. Thank you.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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Everyone is wrong about what is happening, LOL!! So pleased. You will learn what and where and perhaps, why, in the next part. I just thought it a really good place to end it. It's alright, Barbara, you are supposed to be confused at this stage. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from country ranch writer
Goodness t hey have had a time of it from one place to another what in the world is happening to them now guess I will have to wait for the next chapter to unfold.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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Goodness t hey have had a time of it from one place to another what in the world is happening to them now guess I will have to wait for the next chapter to unfold.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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This part will be self explainable in the next part. Mildred and Veronica are going to learn what their assignment is very soon now. Thank you for this lovely review, my friend, I'm glad you'll be here to find out what's going on. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from damommy
That was a quick switch. One minute going to bed, and the next in chaotic surroundings. I can't imagine what's taking place unless it's a bomb. I know a lot of violence was directed at the suffragettes. I like that Mildred told them she was Lady Humphries. Hahahaha
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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That was a quick switch. One minute going to bed, and the next in chaotic surroundings. I can't imagine what's taking place unless it's a bomb. I know a lot of violence was directed at the suffragettes. I like that Mildred told them she was Lady Humphries. Hahahaha
Comment Written 23-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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All will be revealed in the next part, Yvonne, lol, I did enjoy finishing on that note! You are half right, but I'm not telling you any more! I'm glad you liked Mildred's new name. I just can't see our Mildred as a Lady Edith, can you? Lol. Thank you so much for this lovely review, my friend. Big hugs, Sandra xxx