Breakfalupper
Have you eaten this meal?70 total reviews
Comment from Eric1
Hi Dean, absolutely brilliant and lighthearted poem that is soooo funny! Your advice about those consistent whingers as some reviewers are - is just perfect, One of the best poems I have read on here for ages my friend.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Hi Dean, absolutely brilliant and lighthearted poem that is soooo funny! Your advice about those consistent whingers as some reviewers are - is just perfect, One of the best poems I have read on here for ages my friend.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Hahahaha! Thank you, Eric. It was all written tongue-in-cheek, my friend, and not meant to be taken literally. But I have to admit, you and I both know there's some truth in those final two lines. Heh-heh-heh...
Thanks again for yet another fine, positive review. I deeply appreciate it, and I'm happy this got a laugh outta you.
Respectfully
~Dean :}
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Best I've read for ages Dean.
Comment from BOO ghost
Really cute and adorable. An egg is a boneless chicken, ha, ha. It matters little what you eat
as long as you don't taste defeat.
Just dodge your critic's harshest blows
then make them eat a little crow. My favorite quatrain. Imaginative and descriptive, real cool art work makes it a sunny delight with the fright. here's you a six egg omelette, gobble bobble heads, it's you. boo...
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Really cute and adorable. An egg is a boneless chicken, ha, ha. It matters little what you eat
as long as you don't taste defeat.
Just dodge your critic's harshest blows
then make them eat a little crow. My favorite quatrain. Imaginative and descriptive, real cool art work makes it a sunny delight with the fright. here's you a six egg omelette, gobble bobble heads, it's you. boo...
Comment Written 13-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Thanks a million, 'Ghost! I wasn't even sure I should post this silly thing, but I did anyhow. I know you can relate to this. Heck, anyone who writes and slaves over their keyboard as much as we do should be able to relate.
Thanks for the sixer and awesome comments. As always, you made my day!
~Spooky :}
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No problem, Spooky, got to use them or lose them. Back to writing.
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About through with my chapter. need to do some reviewing to get them cent pumps, hahaha. Yep, this is like a roll-over spook tale, I can get many chapters from Boo.
Comment from twinklepoems
Oh what I'll do for 92 cents (and 8 points as my compensense.) I read through lots of fluff and nutter and try to respond without a stutter! Who cares about breakfast or your food, just show us your writer's attitude. Make sense of form and rhyme and meter and maybe a drink if thought's start to teter.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Oh what I'll do for 92 cents (and 8 points as my compensense.) I read through lots of fluff and nutter and try to respond without a stutter! Who cares about breakfast or your food, just show us your writer's attitude. Make sense of form and rhyme and meter and maybe a drink if thought's start to teter.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Hahahaha... what a wonderful poetic response, twinklepoems. Thank you for that, and for taking a shot at it in the first place. I deeply appreciate your time and effort in reviewing, and your thoughtful comments as well.
Always with respect
~Dean:}
Comment from Sis Cat
What a fun poem. Yes, I have almost starved myself on a couple of occasions writing so much that I forget or do not want to stop to eat. What a nuisance! Your poem pokes fun at this. Your rhymes and words are a delicious meal in and of themselves. Your poem also inspires writers to persevere. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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What a fun poem. Yes, I have almost starved myself on a couple of occasions writing so much that I forget or do not want to stop to eat. What a nuisance! Your poem pokes fun at this. Your rhymes and words are a delicious meal in and of themselves. Your poem also inspires writers to persevere. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Thank you for your sincere and receptive response to this slightly different type of post for me, Andre. I deeply appreciate the fact that you not only read and reviewed it, but you enjoyed its light-hearted nature as well.
Always with respect
~Dean
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I don't need sympathy Dean when it gave me a chuckle and the little chuckling crow did that. I'm not such a prolific writer as you so I don't have this problem. Always interesting.
valda
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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I don't need sympathy Dean when it gave me a chuckle and the little chuckling crow did that. I'm not such a prolific writer as you so I don't have this problem. Always interesting.
valda
Comment Written 13-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Oh, you sell yourself too short, Mon Ami. You are an excellent writer, and I should know. I've read a lot of your work.
Thanks for taking time out to read and review this, Pearl. As always, I greatly appreciate both your time and your encouragement.
Always with respect
~Dean ;}
Comment from Bill Schott
This is a nice response to all the criticism one gets after putting so much work into something. It is funny along with airing the crest-falleness (word?) that the author endures with negative criticism.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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This is a nice response to all the criticism one gets after putting so much work into something. It is funny along with airing the crest-falleness (word?) that the author endures with negative criticism.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Thank you very much for your excellent review, Bill. The reviews are a bit...disheartening sometimes, aren't they?
Best wishes
~Dean
Comment from write hand blue
Breakfalupper? uhm! this is inventive poetry, entertaining and rather tragic to read, with the picture of those poor eggs... just waiting for the chop/crack.
Then we see their poor life juices poured from pan to pan... rather macabre (from their point of view). So eggs have joined the list of subjects you terrify with your writing. Really Dean... Hah! Hah!
A cracking poem. (sorry).
:) Mel.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Breakfalupper? uhm! this is inventive poetry, entertaining and rather tragic to read, with the picture of those poor eggs... just waiting for the chop/crack.
Then we see their poor life juices poured from pan to pan... rather macabre (from their point of view). So eggs have joined the list of subjects you terrify with your writing. Really Dean... Hah! Hah!
A cracking poem. (sorry).
:) Mel.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Hahahaha... a "cracking poem", Mel says. That was good, Mel.
Yeah, eggs are just really liquefied flesh, right? At least that's what I've been told. Yuck!
Thanks again for your thoughtful review. I very much appreciate it as always...
~Dean :}
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Yes, Yuck what a description, although you have got it eggzactly right. Oh dear!
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Hahahaha....:)
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Dean
_ LOL! I love the graphics! They are so cool.
_ I'm wore out, not enough energy to eat now.
_ Fun write.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*>*)
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Hi, Dean
_ LOL! I love the graphics! They are so cool.
_ I'm wore out, not enough energy to eat now.
_ Fun write.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*>*)
Comment Written 13-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Thanks a bunch, Jax. Now, go and get some rest. You've been very busy... LOL.
Respectfully
~Dean
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- Posting day for the challenge can get a bit, hectic, shall I say? (*<*)
- Hahhhh, now I can rest today.
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I cab only imagine, Jax... ;)
Comment from Spitfire
I love it. Great presentation. I too hate stopping to write to fix a meal. I can live on Slim Fast's and salads. But men want meat and at least three other items on their plate.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2015
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I love it. Great presentation. I too hate stopping to write to fix a meal. I can live on Slim Fast's and salads. But men want meat and at least three other items on their plate.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2015
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Thank you, Shari. It's good to know that I'm not alone, LOL.
I really appreciate your review.
Respectfully
~Dean ;)
Comment from country ranch writer
SO CLEVER OF YOU HOW QUAINT TO REIGN IT ALL IN IN ONE CAST IRON SKILLET. HUBBY CALL IT ONE POT MEALS WHAT EVER CROSS THE MENUE IS IT FOR THE NIGHT HEHE
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2015
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SO CLEVER OF YOU HOW QUAINT TO REIGN IT ALL IN IN ONE CAST IRON SKILLET. HUBBY CALL IT ONE POT MEALS WHAT EVER CROSS THE MENUE IS IT FOR THE NIGHT HEHE
Comment Written 12-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2015
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Sounds tasty, Country. Kind of like Breakfalupper, which is also pretty good.
Thanks a bunch for the review.
Hugs!
~Dean :}
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hunters delight----hugs