Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

Not sure if this would work without the picture. And of course Miss Muffet would be a blonde bimbo. LOL
I sense a couple of meanings in the last line. Tank could refer to her mind or to her--forget it. :-)

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2014

Yes mind, empty tank, the cartoon was the impetus, thanks for the gracious review.

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

yes, this little poem was funny and he perfect thing to add a smile to the end of the day. I love the line about the glasses, it makes a world of difference. Well done.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2014

Thanks so much for the great review and comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Neonewman

Excellent

What a wonderfully creative piece you have concocted for this funny nonsense poem writing contest. The artwork above that you have chosen is perfect. Good luck in the contest and God bless!

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2014

Thank you so much, a beaut review and comments, blessings, my friend, Roy.

Comment from GWinterwin

Excellent

Good poem with a good picture to make it complete. So little miss Muppet is quite a little lady. Good story told with a small amount of words, being old enough to know she is adopted.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

Thank you so much for this great review and comments,

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

Well, in my eyes youve captured the essence of the contest with your entry. That is a compliment. Best of luck in the contest.

John

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

Thank you John for the great review and comments.

Comment from Chikara

Good

I like the imagery your lines and picture provide, but I have an issue:

"Even you will deduce
in her tank there's no juice "

The second line is so abstract that I don't understand what it's referring to. You set up an image of puppets, then suggest machinery; I literally can't comprehend what the line about juice is literally referring to. I think a rewrite should be done on that line to clear it up.

You also lack proper punctuation on the final line's ending word. Either another exclamation or question mark is appropriate; not a period.

For the most part, you hit the humor well; that obscure phrasing, however, diminishes the punch line and weakens the piece as a whole.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

You're a tough reviewer, it's a metaphor for she has a brain, but nothing in it! Do you not use metaphors?

reply by Chikara on 24-Dec-2014

I do.

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

This is funny. I had Raggedy Ann and Andy when I was a child. It must have been the candy heart sew into each of their chests that made them adopt.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

Thanks for the great review and comments,

Comment from kittykatnoel

Good

Cute funny nonsense poem entry. I was going to mention that line five doesn't really fit with the poem, but it is supposed to be nonsensical so it works.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

Thanks for the review, line 5 does if you think about it!

Comment from Quoiky

Excellent

Cute poem. Easily rhymes and has good tempo. Poor Miss Muppet kinda looks like Barbie. None of the lines seemed 'forced'. Nice work.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

Thank you so much for the great comments and review,

Comment from granny goes viral

Excellent

O.K. Funny, yes. Nonsense, pretty much. I guess she was dumber than dirt, to start with. Not much else to say. But must comply with computer. Have a healthy New Year.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

Thanks for the great comments and review, and merry Christmas and a happy, healthy new year to you as well!