Comment from ShadPep2

Excellent

So few words, but you have such a powerful message! You followed the 1-9-1 pattern exactly. This is beautiful! I also love the art work that is with it. Great job!

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014

Thanks ShadPep2 for this insightful review, :-)

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

This is an interesting Poetic form.

Truly there is both Joy and Hope whenever one touches the hand of a newborn child.

The Joy is in the act; the hope is in the heart.

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 Comment Written 22-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014

I like the last line of your review very much Jay, Thank you for reading and commenting.

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this 1 9 1 poem about the joy and hope that comes from a new born child. good luck in the contest

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 Comment Written 22-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014

Thanks sweetwoodjax for the wonderful comments and best wishes. :-)