Comment from faragon

Excellent

Looks like you put together a winning recipe with what you've cooked up. I like the poem, I is an easy read. The words rhymed very well.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2014

Hah, thanks for making a play on my own words, faragon. Much obliged for the funny review.

Comment from His Grayness

Exceptional

Dean...the creativity here is beyond imagination ... but of course....not for you!! The technical composition here is ten stars on it's own and I'm only hoping, the hell is simply a story as I cannot imagine anyone dealing with that level of discord! Great work! Vance

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014

Thanks so much, Vance. As always, your review has brightened up my otherwise dreary day.

Much obliged, my good friend.

Comment from Delahay

Exceptional

I have come to the conclusion that you are a truly sick, twisted individual, I like that in a person. I can relate. I wonder about myself as well because I liked this ramble into your personal bout of madness. The rhymes are well done and make the stanzas flow together.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014

I am, Ward, very sick and twisted. Or, perhaps sick of being twisted. Or...oh, never mind.

In ant event, I thank you for you kind review and most generous rating.

Comment from GE Parson

Excellent

D K -
You a real piece of work - you really SOMEthing, ad i is jealous. Y'all write better stuff just messing around than I dooz trying really hard.

And wher did you get that grousesum pictures?

Keep 'em coming

Your Friend,
Jerry

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014

Thanks, Jerry, but hardly my friend.

I appreciate your kind review.

reply by GE Parson on 01-Jul-2014

"..but hardly my Friend"? I thought we were Friends. Did I offend you in some way?

reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014

Sure we are, Jerry. I only meant that I could never create something as well as you do poetically when you sit down and set your mind to it. That's all. Shucks, just look at my recent string of contest losses lately.

That's all that I meant, in direct response to you saying I can write better stuff just messing around.

Talk at 'cha later, my friend.

God bless!

reply by GE Parson on 01-Jul-2014

Thank you my Brother that make me feel better.
Later Jerry

reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014

I love ya, man. Never doubt it for a second!

respectfully,

Dean

Comment from A Matter Of Words

Excellent

You are a master of the macabre. The pictures are intensely disturbing and yet draw the reader in for closer looks. The rhythm of the poem pulses in time with the craziness of the subjects mind. Another great work to pop out of your head. Take care...Stephanie

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014

Thank you, Stephanie. I truly appreciate the fact that you think so.

reply by A Matter Of Words on 01-Jul-2014

You're welcome, Dean. You do have a frightening imagination.

Comment from evilynne

Exceptional

I'm not sure I understand it but find it terrifying anyway. The graphics make it even more enjoyably evil. Your mind must be a scary place to visit.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014

Yes, it is, eveilynne. Even I try not to stay there too long, LOL.

Thanks for your wonderfully entertaining review and six star rating.

Comment from DanielEkine

Excellent

The artwork is more than happy to be exceptional. A very famous style, you have created.
The repetition of this words in a unique way is gorgeous.

"clapping,buying,fulfilling,humming,turning,teeming."
Thanks for always beating me to it. Left it in my reservoir.
Dean Kuch, remains one of our renowned author.Smiles. A very fierce hell, you have presented.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014

Thanks, Daniel. I'm truly glad that you feel that way at least.

Much obliged.

Comment from Pili Pubul

Excellent

The writing is excellent at the rhytmn of Edgar A Poe,
Your cooking was definitely cook in hell, not my taste
but recognize your great talent. Pili

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014

Thanks, Pili. Has no one told you? I'm old Edgar reborn.

Seriously, I appreciate your very kind review and generous rating.

reply by Pili Pubul on 01-Jul-2014

Nobody told me , but now that I know I will be ready,
it took me by surprise. Seriously you are an excellent poet. Pili

reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014

Thank you, Pili. I'm very happy that you think so, at least.

reply by Pili Pubul on 01-Jul-2014

LOL, you know it...

Comment from Warren Rodgers

Excellent

Hi Dean, I'm not sure where it comes from either lol. Oh God the images you come up with are creepy!! did you have sisters you liked to scare? No seriously your dark poems are great. Your -ing words add to the fright I feel as I go down the page. It feels like hell, I can tell you that!
Excellent poem in your unique style.

all the best,
Rodger

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014

Thank you, Rodger. No sisters, but two younger brothers I terrified quite often.

I appreciate your kind review.

Comment from L.M.Mullins

Excellent

Have you been reading Poe again before you go to sleep? Very hands-on approach to unleashing the darks side of ones mind.
LM

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014

Nope, but I puposely set out to write a quick poem using Poe's classic, The Raven, as a guide for the cadence. It took all of about five minutes to write. It's easy to write what you feel.

Thanks for your kind review, LM.