A Picture's Worth a Thousand Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "~Delicious~"A compilation of pictapoems from my portfolio
65 total reviews
Comment from Carrie Carson
OMG, this so creepy. But a perfect companion to your favorite quote. I try to be brave to read some violent pieces and this one as a plus is at least literary. :)
Good form and flow, no pun intended, with this. Great artwork, too. :) Carrie
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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OMG, this so creepy. But a perfect companion to your favorite quote. I try to be brave to read some violent pieces and this one as a plus is at least literary. :)
Good form and flow, no pun intended, with this. Great artwork, too. :) Carrie
Comment Written 24-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Heh heh, Carrie said "good flow", that was go-o-o-o-d!
Seriously, thanks for reading and reviewing this one for me. I'm glad you liked it, Carrie.
Comment from rouskin
Good complimentary photo that grabs my attention from the start and a hell of a good piece of poetry. Perfect as always
Thank you for sharing and have a great week Blessings, Rouskin
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Good complimentary photo that grabs my attention from the start and a hell of a good piece of poetry. Perfect as always
Thank you for sharing and have a great week Blessings, Rouskin
Comment Written 24-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Thanks for such a positive review, rouskin, my good friend! I appreciate it!
Comment from Dirus
Wow nice art work. Spooky. I liked the last tow lines the most. good visuals. all looks good. Keep up th enice work. and thank you for th egreat read. :)
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Wow nice art work. Spooky. I liked the last tow lines the most. good visuals. all looks good. Keep up th enice work. and thank you for th egreat read. :)
Comment Written 24-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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I thank you for reading & reviewing it for me, Dirus. Much obliged!
Comment from poet.wayne
Nice! Deeply depraved demoniac desires dessert! I loved the way you began the second stanza...sure there's some term for it, though I can't call it to mind right now. The music really helped set the mood, too...
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Nice! Deeply depraved demoniac desires dessert! I loved the way you began the second stanza...sure there's some term for it, though I can't call it to mind right now. The music really helped set the mood, too...
Comment Written 24-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much, PW. As a fellow connoisseur of the
Comment from ragamuffin
Another excellent write. Intense and chilling. I didn't know the information in your author's notes on the last victim; it's very interesting. You did a great job in conveying that info in your poem. Extremely entertaining piece.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Another excellent write. Intense and chilling. I didn't know the information in your author's notes on the last victim; it's very interesting. You did a great job in conveying that info in your poem. Extremely entertaining piece.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Thanks very much, ragamuffin. I always look forward to your comments and unique insight...
Comment from Righteous Riter
Good use of the aabb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good perfect rhyming with fire/dire...told/cold. Good description that paints a clear picture in my mind. Good alliteration. Good dialogue within the piece. The photo compliments the piece well as the words bring the photo to life.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Good use of the aabb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good perfect rhyming with fire/dire...told/cold. Good description that paints a clear picture in my mind. Good alliteration. Good dialogue within the piece. The photo compliments the piece well as the words bring the photo to life.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Thank you, my brother!
Comment from Kashif Ali Abbas
It is a powerful read and at the same time, too much intense. Although you have intense language warning but the art work is not that impressive. To create horror you should use your words and not the images or pictures.
on the whole good one
K
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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2014
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It is a powerful read and at the same time, too much intense. Although you have intense language warning but the art work is not that impressive. To create horror you should use your words and not the images or pictures.
on the whole good one
K
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2014
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review "Delicious" for me, Kashif. I appreciate your thoughts and comments. Sorry it didn't strike your fancy.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Aah, yes -I remember that feeling.
Bone chilling fear and dry retching.
Another amazing Pictapoem dripping with the Scent of a now bloodless victim.
I'm not sleeping so well now AND...
I can't imagine why not. Lol.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Aah, yes -I remember that feeling.
Bone chilling fear and dry retching.
Another amazing Pictapoem dripping with the Scent of a now bloodless victim.
I'm not sleeping so well now AND...
I can't imagine why not. Lol.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Hah ha, I can't imagine "why not" either, seken58.
Thanks for the entertaining and positive review!
Comment from GWinterwin
Very good poem there was a picture that certainly makes it all complete. Good word flow and rhyming also make it easy to read and understand. Jack the Ripper, no doubt the most famous killer of all time.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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Very good poem there was a picture that certainly makes it all complete. Good word flow and rhyming also make it easy to read and understand. Jack the Ripper, no doubt the most famous killer of all time.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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Thanks for taking the time to read & review this one for me, GWinterin. I truly appreciate it!
Comment from Glasstruth
A bloody, deliciously evil story of the cursed. Can't help but see some humor here, especially in these lines:
"Last thing I heard-before my screams-"My appetite is vicious
Ruby lips dripping with blood, said, "Oh, you're so delicious"
There was a serial killer in Chicago, named H. H. Holmes who was a doctor. He traveled to London around 1888. Some believe the two are the same person. Their handwritings was analyzed. There was a 97.95 per cent chance the samples are a match. Or maybe, the theory is just there to sell books? You got my curiosity going. Time to sharpen some knives. Thanks for sharing. Les
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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A bloody, deliciously evil story of the cursed. Can't help but see some humor here, especially in these lines:
"Last thing I heard-before my screams-"My appetite is vicious
Ruby lips dripping with blood, said, "Oh, you're so delicious"
There was a serial killer in Chicago, named H. H. Holmes who was a doctor. He traveled to London around 1888. Some believe the two are the same person. Their handwritings was analyzed. There was a 97.95 per cent chance the samples are a match. Or maybe, the theory is just there to sell books? You got my curiosity going. Time to sharpen some knives. Thanks for sharing. Les
Comment Written 23-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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Thanks so much, Glasstruth! It's always a pleasure to receive a review from you, my friend...