A Picture's Worth a Thousand Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "I love You, My Child"A compilation of pictapoems from my portfolio
67 total reviews
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is a lovely poem from the author. This makes an interesting break from your usual fare, and it is refreshing to find that you are a versatile author.
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This is a lovely poem from the author. This makes an interesting break from your usual fare, and it is refreshing to find that you are a versatile author.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2013
Comment from Matthew M.
I really liked the way the poem wrapped around the picture. It truly adds to the creative of this piece. Though, I didn't really like the laughing baby. Maybe, that's because I have read so many of your other pieces and I keep waiting for the scream to happen afterward.
The love for a child is truly an amazing thing. It is so important to be there for them in every way, but sometimes it is so easy because you love them so much.
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I really liked the way the poem wrapped around the picture. It truly adds to the creative of this piece. Though, I didn't really like the laughing baby. Maybe, that's because I have read so many of your other pieces and I keep waiting for the scream to happen afterward.
The love for a child is truly an amazing thing. It is so important to be there for them in every way, but sometimes it is so easy because you love them so much.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2013
Comment from Schalk Jacobs
Dean. what can I say? This poem, dedicated to your kids is stunning in it's simplicity and the volumes it speaks. it is four lines that capitulates everything what parenting is about. Love, security, mentoring and support are effectively displayed in this poem by your cord choice.
You also present it in such a stunning format that is totally mind blowing and further enhances the story and emotions behind the poem. This black and white illustration of a mother holding her infant high was a perfect choice.
Congrats on the accolades you heave garnedred with this poem.
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Dean. what can I say? This poem, dedicated to your kids is stunning in it's simplicity and the volumes it speaks. it is four lines that capitulates everything what parenting is about. Love, security, mentoring and support are effectively displayed in this poem by your cord choice.
You also present it in such a stunning format that is totally mind blowing and further enhances the story and emotions behind the poem. This black and white illustration of a mother holding her infant high was a perfect choice.
Congrats on the accolades you heave garnedred with this poem.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2013
Comment from B. Diehl
This is beautiful and adorable. I rarely ever do this, but I'm giving you six stars for this one. It just touched me too much for me to give you anything less.
-B<3
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This is beautiful and adorable. I rarely ever do this, but I'm giving you six stars for this one. It just touched me too much for me to give you anything less.
-B<3
Comment Written 10-Dec-2013
Comment from daeneam
Six stars for the love you have for your children! I love my children too. I see to it that I am always there when my children need me and I protect them with my might and heart. I will never abandon them and I am praying hard to God to give me the strength to become a good mother. I know what it feels like to be deprived of a caring mother.
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Six stars for the love you have for your children! I love my children too. I see to it that I am always there when my children need me and I protect them with my might and heart. I will never abandon them and I am praying hard to God to give me the strength to become a good mother. I know what it feels like to be deprived of a caring mother.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2013
Comment from Author Unknown
OH GOD! The baby laughing just scared the BEJESUS out of me Dean! LOL! Totally unexpected for some reason. I guess I'm just beat. This is great tho. Most delightful! :) A.
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OH GOD! The baby laughing just scared the BEJESUS out of me Dean! LOL! Totally unexpected for some reason. I guess I'm just beat. This is great tho. Most delightful! :) A.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2013
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
This is such a positive and thoughtful poem.
I love your creative and thoughtful approach to the presentation of your work.
Our children really are God's most precious gifts to us so I agree -love them whol-heartedly always and unconditionally.
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This is such a positive and thoughtful poem.
I love your creative and thoughtful approach to the presentation of your work.
Our children really are God's most precious gifts to us so I agree -love them whol-heartedly always and unconditionally.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2013
Comment from Treischel
What a beautiful Expression if love and commitment to your children. Beyond the words, the picture was very touching. The word -luck was a bit hard to make out, but the overall imprecation was vivid and grabed the heart as well as the eye.
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What a beautiful Expression if love and commitment to your children. Beyond the words, the picture was very touching. The word -luck was a bit hard to make out, but the overall imprecation was vivid and grabed the heart as well as the eye.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2013
Comment from Twilightspire
Aww ya big softy. Lol. Seriously, I like this. Simplistic with a good rhyme scheme, but very touching and heart warming. I love to see the multi-faceted use of your talent. Good job.
-T.J.
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Aww ya big softy. Lol. Seriously, I like this. Simplistic with a good rhyme scheme, but very touching and heart warming. I love to see the multi-faceted use of your talent. Good job.
-T.J.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2013