The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 73 "Snow-bound reverie (5-7-5)"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
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Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is a thought-provoking poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. It is time to think about the frost and snow yet again. Luckily, it is still fairly mild here in the UK.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2013
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This is a thought-provoking poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. It is time to think about the frost and snow yet again. Luckily, it is still fairly mild here in the UK.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2013
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Missouri is mild compared to some of our States here in the USA. :-) But, it's cold enough for me. (21 today) So glad you enjoyed this one Tomes. :-) Carolyn
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My pleasure. take care.
Tom.
Comment from rouskin
Snow-bound reverie
crystal dreams of warm white sand
nocturnal head trip
This is a really good poem and a worthy contest entry
Best of luck in the contest
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2013
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Snow-bound reverie
crystal dreams of warm white sand
nocturnal head trip
This is a really good poem and a worthy contest entry
Best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 09-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2013
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Thanks for the review and especially the good wishes. :-) Carolyn
Comment from livelylinda
Carolyn: You have written a good 5/7/5 and the picture looks so beautiful to me. I lived in Michigan for 41 years and miss the snow (looking at it, only). I look out my window and I see flowers blooming, green grass and no snow to shovel or attempt to navigate within. Keep warm! livelylinda
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2013
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Carolyn: You have written a good 5/7/5 and the picture looks so beautiful to me. I lived in Michigan for 41 years and miss the snow (looking at it, only). I look out my window and I see flowers blooming, green grass and no snow to shovel or attempt to navigate within. Keep warm! livelylinda
Comment Written 09-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2013
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I love snow.... just a short run of it though and I am ready for spring.. Maybe that's just fickle. LOL I am ready for flowers out my window, but the Missouri climate isn't. Thank you so very much for this great review. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Spitfire
Excellent satori line. Live the image in the second line because crytstal can apply to both the cold and the warm image. Head trip--good way to say daydream at night. I live in Florida. 82 high here. :-)
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2013
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Excellent satori line. Live the image in the second line because crytstal can apply to both the cold and the warm image. Head trip--good way to say daydream at night. I live in Florida. 82 high here. :-)
Comment Written 09-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2013
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I thought about you and your warm weather as I was concocting this one. Thank you so much for the great review. :-) Carolyn
Comment from B. Diehl
I like this a lot; it's an easy-read, which I can almost always enjoy. Also, it's meaningful! Conveying meaning with simple language is a lot harder than it sounds, so I salute you. Please check out my work sometime. :) Take care.
P.S. Enjoy the five stars!
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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I like this a lot; it's an easy-read, which I can almost always enjoy. Also, it's meaningful! Conveying meaning with simple language is a lot harder than it sounds, so I salute you. Please check out my work sometime. :) Take care.
P.S. Enjoy the five stars!
Comment Written 08-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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What a wonderful review and rating you have given me. Thank you for both. I certainly will check out your work. Have a great week. :-) Carolyn
Comment from angelface2
Alas that is all we can do; take a head trip. But to where. My daughter lives in Jackson Ms. and it was 23 on Friday. BRRR. Nice tanka Carolyn.
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Alas that is all we can do; take a head trip. But to where. My daughter lives in Jackson Ms. and it was 23 on Friday. BRRR. Nice tanka Carolyn.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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Thanks so much for the great review and fun comments. Mississippi at 23... that is a BRRRRRRRRR. Wonder what Biloxi and Gulf Port look like? Take care, :-) Carolyn
Comment from jmdg1954
"Snow-bound reverie
crystal dreams of warm white sand
nocturnal head trip "
Great words... Crystal dreams of warm white sand...
Makes me want to head to the islands!!
So nicely worded Carolyn.
John
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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"Snow-bound reverie
crystal dreams of warm white sand
nocturnal head trip "
Great words... Crystal dreams of warm white sand...
Makes me want to head to the islands!!
So nicely worded Carolyn.
John
Comment Written 08-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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Yep, me too. Actually we haven't had it bad, but it is still snowing, just not a lot of accumulation yet. We could go see A Tarnished Knight and Hawaiian Mermaid in guess where, yep, Hawaii. Glad you liked it John, we are leaving for Phoenix on the 18th. Should be warmer there. Have a great week my friend.
:-) Carolyn
Comment from AprilShower
Winter is a beautiful time of the year, as long as we don't have to drive to work. Yes, it is nice to live where it is warm all year, too. That is a pretty picture and nice snowy poem, which is in the shape of a snowflake.
April :o)
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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Winter is a beautiful time of the year, as long as we don't have to drive to work. Yes, it is nice to live where it is warm all year, too. That is a pretty picture and nice snowy poem, which is in the shape of a snowflake.
April :o)
Comment Written 08-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the great comments. Being retired has its perks, no drive to work, being one of them. :-) Carolyn
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
It is also snowing here but it certainly is pretty and perfect writing/reviewing weather. I love sitting and watching it. I wish there weren't so many accidents outside but what can you do other than slow down and take it easy. No need to rush. Great job with this and stay warm :)
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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It is also snowing here but it certainly is pretty and perfect writing/reviewing weather. I love sitting and watching it. I wish there weren't so many accidents outside but what can you do other than slow down and take it easy. No need to rush. Great job with this and stay warm :)
Comment Written 08-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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What a nice review. People tend to drive a bit crazy in snowy weather. Getting to church was a little challenge but we just 'mosey' along like you said and take it easy. Where in the world do you live? Stay warm yourself. :-) Carolyn
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I'm in Wisconsin and coming home from church wasn't bad for me because it had just started snowing but I'm glad I didn't go to late service :)
Comment from MizKat
Hi Carolyn,
This is a really nice 5-7-5 poem for the contest. If you think it's cold where you live you should come to northern MN as our snow is deep and the temps have been in the -29 temps for days and still staying.
Kat
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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Hi Carolyn,
This is a really nice 5-7-5 poem for the contest. If you think it's cold where you live you should come to northern MN as our snow is deep and the temps have been in the -29 temps for days and still staying.
Kat
Comment Written 08-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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BrRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR. We have been in lower teens and that is the lowest so far. Larry and I leave for Phoenix, Az on the 18th. We hope not to run into bad weather, but we are driving. It should be warmer when we get there. :-) Stay warm and thanks for the great review. :-) Carolyn