Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

Indeed, I have heard the very same thing. You have to ask your angel if you want help. This seems to be a dialogue between one who rebelled and is seducing mankind. Creepy picture!

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013

Thanks, Spit, and you're right. A little glimpse into my inner most thoughts, if you will...

Comment from Amsterdam

Excellent

Just like a girl
Rocks the world
You had better pay devils due

Satin controls women
Women are driven

What real men should do

Soooo many fools
I don't include you

As you know....
A person, is smart

But, when it comes to all...
Fate seals, all us fall

Because them dumb asses never knew.

Sorry..
The truth

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013

That was great, Amsterdam, and also very true. Hey, you know what they say...the truth hurts!

Thanks again, my friend...

Comment from Patrick G Cox

Excellent

Hi Dean Kuch,

Your explanation of the status of Angels is very good, and the poem you have built on the 'other' kind is a very good triolet.

I liked the mental images you have built into the lines.

Well done,

Patrick

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013

Thanks very much, Patrick. I'm very glad you liked it.

Comment from poet.wayne

Exceptional

Nice hymn! This reads like one! I do agree with most of your author's notes.. I've even begun to believe that my "imaginary friends" might in fact be angels... with the same demented sense of humor I have... here's my take on the fallen angels. In Ezekiel (I think), it's mentioned that Lucifer swept one third of the "stars" of heaven to earth with him, when in prideful rebellion, he sought to equate himself with Jehovah God. They all committed the sin of prideful rebellion, or identification with that. The Scriptures denote the only unforgivable sin as blasphemy of the Holy Spirit... a lesser being attempting to equate itself with its creator would be doing that...

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013

Yep, you're absolutely right-on, PW!

Thanks for the insights, as well as the intelligent review.

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

solid use of abab rhyming along with good internal rhyming
good alliteration in phrases like damning disgrace and
devil's due
a stunningly presented and effectively moody multi-media piece
Brooke

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013

Thanks, Brooke! I am very glad to have gotten such high praise, especially from the poetic "master" herself!

Comment from GE Parson

Excellent

Brother Dean,
In interesting message about talking to angels. The Bibe says that are ministering spirits to those who are god's children, but nothing about talking to them. What Scripture does say is we are to cast all our care and concerns upon the Lord, and that there is but one mediator between God and men, Jesus Christ; so that eliminated angels, Mary or any of the Bible characters that the Roman Catholic leadership have declared as a Saint; everyone in Christ is a saint ie. a called out ONE.
Just saying...........Your Friend, Jerry

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013

Thanks, Brother Jerry. I really appreciate the great feedback, and review!

Comment from tbacha58

Excellent

Hi Dean, this poem is a master piece, you stay away for a while, and come back with an unimaginable force. The music, the picture your feelings, the translations, all together bring out a phenomenal poem.
Well done. Terry

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013

Thanks very much, Terry. You made me blush, my friend, LOL...

Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

There - you couldn't resist - and albeit sorrowful,
it's also rather lovely and beautifully presented.

the beauty and the beast - it reminds me of.

just love the music.

Margaret

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013

Thank you so much, Margaret. I truly appreciate it!

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Dean
you amaze me of how you wrote of how the devil can fool himself to be a thing of beauty wearing an angelic face.

So this is a romance poem between beauty and the beast.

Good one with rhyme.

Gert

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013

Thanks, Gert. I'm very happy to know you enjoyed this one!

Comment from Winslow

Exceptional

Dear Dean,

A very macabre description of the angel of darkness, how she seduces you. Great flow, word choice, and the piano music adds a nice touch. To dance with death is rewarding indeed until the time comes when we have to pay the our dues.

Well done Horror Meister,

Winslow

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013

Thanks, Winslow, and you're spot-on with your assessment, my friend.

Great review, I truly appreciate it!