A Picture's Worth a Thousand Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Purple's Majesty"A compilation of pictapoems from my portfolio
67 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
OMG Dean, You really out did yourself on this one. I am sure Brooke will love this. She is such wonderful person. The pictures and the poem are amazing. Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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OMG Dean, You really out did yourself on this one. I am sure Brooke will love this. She is such wonderful person. The pictures and the poem are amazing. Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 31-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Thanks so much, I.raven (Linda). I am very happy to know that you enjoyed it.
Comment from c_lucas
The patriotic part of me related this with the song. Your unique poem is vere well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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The patriotic part of me related this with the song. Your unique poem is vere well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Thanks very much, Charlie. As always, I appreciate it.
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You're welcome, Dean. Charlie
Comment from ravenblack
Where are the zombies? Seriously, a really good write. Great rhythm and rhyme and needless to say, a great picture. Surfs lilac surge- awesome language/image.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Where are the zombies? Seriously, a really good write. Great rhythm and rhyme and needless to say, a great picture. Surfs lilac surge- awesome language/image.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Heh, well, Brooke didn't want any zombies, boogey-men nor vampires in this one, so I had to leave 'em out. Rest assured, despite so many telling me that I should forsake the "horror junk", and stick to more serious writings such as this, the monsters will be back...With a vengeance!
Thanks, again...
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
A six it is for the person I most love to read except I skip the truly gory parts. Paramedic on ambilance did that to me.
This isnwell written but I would expect nothing less
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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A six it is for the person I most love to read except I skip the truly gory parts. Paramedic on ambilance did that to me.
This isnwell written but I would expect nothing less
Comment Written 31-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Thanks so much for that wonderful compliment, Barb. That was such a nice thing to say, and I am glad you feel that way.
I sincerely appreciate your kind words and review.
Comment from write hand blue
Well Dean, we now know that you are ambidextrous. LOL.
I'm interested to see that you have left the blood and gore behind for this poem.
This is a beautiful poem and does good justice to this subject.
We know someone who owns Jersey lavender farm. They have fields of lavender growing at this moment, pity you can't transmit the smell in your poem. (or perhaps not)
You have done a fine job with the words. This makes it worth six stars. ****** That's the best I can do with special effects. LOL.
:) mel.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Well Dean, we now know that you are ambidextrous. LOL.
I'm interested to see that you have left the blood and gore behind for this poem.
This is a beautiful poem and does good justice to this subject.
We know someone who owns Jersey lavender farm. They have fields of lavender growing at this moment, pity you can't transmit the smell in your poem. (or perhaps not)
You have done a fine job with the words. This makes it worth six stars. ****** That's the best I can do with special effects. LOL.
:) mel.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Hah, well, special FX aren't everything, Mel. The writing is the of the poetry. All the rest is just the gravy...
Thanks for your wonderful review...
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My pleasure...
Comment from w.j.debi
When you deviate from your favorite horror tales you only show how masterful a writer you are. This is emotionally satisfying as well as a verbal and visual delight.
Thanks for taking up adewpearl's challenge and creating this.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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When you deviate from your favorite horror tales you only show how masterful a writer you are. This is emotionally satisfying as well as a verbal and visual delight.
Thanks for taking up adewpearl's challenge and creating this.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Thanks for that wonderful compliment, w.j. debi. To write, and write effectively, I have always believed we gotta' have one foot in the clouds, and one in the grave...
Thanks again for your great review.
Comment from His Grayness
Dean: I'm nearly dazed with the majesty and impact of this work..and so sorry that I have no sixes left to offer but I
'm sure it will gather many! This is truly one of the most magnificent presentations I've ever seen and I would suggest that (for the enrichment of the poetic craft. and perhaps your own purse) you offer a technical course on how to construct these marvelous "PictomusicPoems" sign me up first! Awsome! And congratulations! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Dean: I'm nearly dazed with the majesty and impact of this work..and so sorry that I have no sixes left to offer but I
'm sure it will gather many! This is truly one of the most magnificent presentations I've ever seen and I would suggest that (for the enrichment of the poetic craft. and perhaps your own purse) you offer a technical course on how to construct these marvelous "PictomusicPoems" sign me up first! Awsome! And congratulations! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment Written 31-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Thanks Vance, and I have taught a few poets to do this, our own poet.wayne is one of them. Private message me sometime, I'd be glad to explain to you, to the best of my abilities, how to construct one.
Thanks, again my friend!
Comment from Darkhorse555
what an amazingly beautiful piece of writing my friend sitting alone in the silent whispers you crowned purple very beautiful my dear friend
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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what an amazingly beautiful piece of writing my friend sitting alone in the silent whispers you crowned purple very beautiful my dear friend
Comment Written 31-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Thanks very much, Oh Dark One. Coming from you, I really appreciate that!
Comment from Capricorn30
And an outstanding pictapoem it is!
A well-crafted writing, incorporating the color purple in a spiritual manner;
Great visual imagery: "violet symphony's delight"; "fields of lilac"--good creativity in utilizing various shades of this deep color;
All is right when God fills our world with colorful splendor, as he calls upon us to enter his glorious kingdom.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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And an outstanding pictapoem it is!
A well-crafted writing, incorporating the color purple in a spiritual manner;
Great visual imagery: "violet symphony's delight"; "fields of lilac"--good creativity in utilizing various shades of this deep color;
All is right when God fills our world with colorful splendor, as he calls upon us to enter his glorious kingdom.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Thanks, Capricorn30. I am very glad that you connected with this one.
Comment from Mastery
Another fine piece,Dean. Your work s exquisite to say the least. You are missing the boat if you don't incorporate these in some sort of active "book" where they can be seen and appreciated by someone other than Fanstorians. Bravo! Bob
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Another fine piece,Dean. Your work s exquisite to say the least. You are missing the boat if you don't incorporate these in some sort of active "book" where they can be seen and appreciated by someone other than Fanstorians. Bravo! Bob
Comment Written 31-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Thanks so much, Bob, what a wonderful compliment, coming from a talented writer such as yourself. I do appreciate that!