senyru (city people stare)
senyr contest 5/7/522 total reviews
Comment from ronnie k
A profound yet simple message that such be heard around the world. WE as a people are so into I and me we forget there is a THEE.
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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2013
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A profound yet simple message that such be heard around the world. WE as a people are so into I and me we forget there is a THEE.
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Comment Written 23-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2013
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This is a great review, thank you.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this senryu poem about the way we try to look past the problems of this world. i wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2013
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this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this senryu poem about the way we try to look past the problems of this world. i wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 23-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the review.