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Comment from gazzagodbod
My gramps was never scared of a storm neither he was a farmer and once on the back of his tractor trailor got struck by lightning always said it was his rubber wellies that saved him great piece my friend gazza
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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2013
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My gramps was never scared of a storm neither he was a farmer and once on the back of his tractor trailor got struck by lightning always said it was his rubber wellies that saved him great piece my friend gazza
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Comment Written 25-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2013
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Thank you for the kind and encouraging review.
Comment from kcross11
and kissin' the house good-bye - I really liked this line
A great use of the vernacular, without it being difficult to read or too heavy. You also did a really good job with use of the words, it all felt very seamless. This is a really good entry, and I liked the simpleness of lemonade with grandpa!
Good luck!
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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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and kissin' the house good-bye - I really liked this line
A great use of the vernacular, without it being difficult to read or too heavy. You also did a really good job with use of the words, it all felt very seamless. This is a really good entry, and I liked the simpleness of lemonade with grandpa!
Good luck!
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Comment Written 25-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging review.