Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

this is a brilliant abcderian piece of poetry! i love the topic and the execution. how to prepare foran attack..
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012

Thanks, Rebekka

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Yes, your colorful use of language does reflect your personality, albeit undercover for this contest. Your title caught my attention and the illustration maintained the tone. Some of your advice is actually wise, and I enjoyed your use of alliteration. I liked your clever concluding line as well. Best wishes in the contest. -Joan

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012

Thanks, Joan

Comment from Hollyhock

Exceptional

This is a sixer! It made me laugh, I was always anxious to see what the next letter brought.
Hoping against hope that you would be able to make it work all the way through, without having to resort to non-grammatical form or "sticky" rhymes, AND YOU DID!
I think I liked letter V best, but they were all funny and often with that ring of truth.
Excellent, good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012

Thank you so much for the kind review and the six stars - much appreciated

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

LOL. Your humor is brilliant. My favorirte lines are "Lady Luck's an oxymoron; never trust a dame. & Help out a mate who's locked away by visiting his wife." Good luck with the contest! Les

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012

Thanks, Les

Comment from Vladilynn

Excellent

This is a nice ABC poem, what a job to rob a wealthy fools!
Very creative, versatility...is good? Lol I guess!


Reading it makes me smile, before I'd posted one too, it's about War and it's really challenging. Eventhough it's a error posting that time:(

Thank you for sharing.

Love much,
Lynn:0)

Good luck for the contest!

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012

Thank you - I shall keep an eye out for your entry.

reply by Vladilynn on 10-Sep-2012

That was been a while when I posted one for a poetry poem. Lately I'm hook with stories:)

Comment from juliedickson55

Excellent

Very funny, this ABC poem of robbery!

I love the Q's
"Quintessential qualities are quietness and quickness."

and good advice
"Versatility is good; don't rob the same bank twice."

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012

Thanks, Julie

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this si s vey well written, mystery writer, you did a great job writing this abecdarian poem about the rules of being a good little hoodlum, i wish you the best of luck in the contest

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012

Thank you

Comment from Onixxiya

Excellent

This is amazing. To be able to work within such a strict form and make is rhyme and such a solid theme. You are a winner. I wont say good luck, I say, well done.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2012

Thank you for the kind words.

Comment from amarherig14

Excellent

Well written ABC poem and very creative.The imagery is fabulous ,for these rules are what the hoodlum will apply to his life .The art used is a good choice for your entertaining write.Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2012

Thanks for the nice review and generous stars.

reply by amarherig14 on 08-Sep-2012

You are welcome.Regards,Margie

reply by amarherig14 on 08-Sep-2012

You are welcome.Warm regards,margie

Comment from Meta~Mark

Excellent

Dodgy Desiderata is a clever ditty of a poem in this
The ABC's of Life contest, nice photo to illustrate your point as well

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2012

Thanks for the nice review and generous stars.