The Mount
A sermon by the Lord.30 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I agree. This is well written.
God can hear everyone's prayers and knows all of our hearts. I wrote a version of the Sermon on the Mount as a poem, too. It's one of my favorite passages from the Bible. I'm Greek American and Greek Orthodox so I have learned about Jesus's Life, from very young.
Peace and best wishes,
Alex
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I agree. This is well written.
God can hear everyone's prayers and knows all of our hearts. I wrote a version of the Sermon on the Mount as a poem, too. It's one of my favorite passages from the Bible. I'm Greek American and Greek Orthodox so I have learned about Jesus's Life, from very young.
Peace and best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 16-Jan-2025
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I talk to God every night by my altar. I love the sermon on the mount.
Excellent poem with good rhyming and meter that doesn't sound forced. The presentation is beautiful.
Well done!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
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I talk to God every night by my altar. I love the sermon on the mount.
Excellent poem with good rhyming and meter that doesn't sound forced. The presentation is beautiful.
Well done!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 16-Jan-2025
Comment from ESOSTINE
This poem is a narration of the story of Christ, His teachings and the works and miracles He performed here on earth. H e is the same God today and He is still capable of performing wonders, answering prayers. Thanks so much, dear Willie for sharing your thoughts.
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This poem is a narration of the story of Christ, His teachings and the works and miracles He performed here on earth. H e is the same God today and He is still capable of performing wonders, answering prayers. Thanks so much, dear Willie for sharing your thoughts.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2025
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Such a hopeful poem that brings us hope and salvation through our Mesia, Jesus. Loved this advice :"Talk to God
Whenever you can,
Help him fulfil
His Heavenly plan."
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Such a hopeful poem that brings us hope and salvation through our Mesia, Jesus. Loved this advice :"Talk to God
Whenever you can,
Help him fulfil
His Heavenly plan."
Comment Written 16-Jan-2025
Comment from Nellys1983
Wonderful rhymes and wonderful sentiment. Jesus did many great things and taught many valuable lessons as he continues to do so today and ultimately ended paying a price for man's sins
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Wonderful rhymes and wonderful sentiment. Jesus did many great things and taught many valuable lessons as he continues to do so today and ultimately ended paying a price for man's sins
Comment Written 16-Jan-2025
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the sentiment and your meaningful words Willie, your rhymes and flow add the joy to this poem as it sings to me like a prayer, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
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I enjoyed the sentiment and your meaningful words Willie, your rhymes and flow add the joy to this poem as it sings to me like a prayer, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 16-Jan-2025
Comment from TPAC
That's the goal, helping to fulfill that plan. I find we have fallen short of that reality. Not doing the things Jesus attempted to prove possible. All waiting on him to do: making ourselves completely innocent of any probable wrongs.
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That's the goal, helping to fulfill that plan. I find we have fallen short of that reality. Not doing the things Jesus attempted to prove possible. All waiting on him to do: making ourselves completely innocent of any probable wrongs.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2025
Comment from royowen
Really the Lord's Prayer was an outline of how and what to pray for, instead bringing a shopping list of wants and wherefores, as He laid out in the gospels, God knows what we need and want, but it's good to ask, well done Willie, blessings Roy
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Really the Lord's Prayer was an outline of how and what to pray for, instead bringing a shopping list of wants and wherefores, as He laid out in the gospels, God knows what we need and want, but it's good to ask, well done Willie, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Jan-2025
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Willie,
This is a lovely poem. Jesus was a great man that ended up paying for our sins. His mother Mary had to be so sad. I like the way this rhymes. I love rhyming poems too, but It is a challenge.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
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Willie,
This is a lovely poem. Jesus was a great man that ended up paying for our sins. His mother Mary had to be so sad. I like the way this rhymes. I love rhyming poems too, but It is a challenge.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
Comment from Peter Jarvis
Your poem is wonderful as it captures the very idea of faith and the importance of the teachings of Jesus. The narrative is very smooth, clear and informative as it takes the reader through some of the major events of Jesus' life and His wake.
Thank you for sharing this lovely poem,
Warmest regards
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Your poem is wonderful as it captures the very idea of faith and the importance of the teachings of Jesus. The narrative is very smooth, clear and informative as it takes the reader through some of the major events of Jesus' life and His wake.
Thank you for sharing this lovely poem,
Warmest regards
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
